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10. Earl Grey at the End of the World - TheTravelingLemon (In Progress)





The cover caught my attention, before anything else.

Your story, is the first one I've read in which you knew it'd be a short story.  


1. I loved the fact, that your main character is a guy. So many authors, tell the POV from the girl's side. It's nice to have a change in perspective.  


2. Another aspect I liked, was your plot. From what I got in the first chapter, your character is about to embark on a long journey to the end of the world. This concept is so cool to me, no one's tried something this risky. Either for lack of imagination, or just lack of motivation.   


There's only one thing I disliked about your story.  


1. You as an author, write very poetically when being descriptive. Which isn't bad, but it's not an attribute I'm fond of. It's too many words, when layman's terms would suite nicely. This is just ME, other people could just as easily love your writing style. <3   


In all I have favorited and liked your story, because I want to know how it ends. I hope you keep going, and I can't wait to see what happens to Michael. :)

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