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3. My Unnatural Disaster- by Katie Pip

 

First, The picture of the dog that is Poco is adorable!!! I love him.

 

So chapter 3 is a total cliff hanger. I love cliff hangers and made me feel the need to read more.

 

I think you should have tried to develop Vito a little more because her kind of is just another character he doesn't seem to stick out.

 

Lastly, really!?! Steelers!?! I'm joking but you couldn't of thought of a better team?

 

Overall Rating: 7 out of !0

 

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