2. Review of 'Talking to Gravestones'
It is so far quite undeveloped, but from what I can tell is really, really intriguing. I love the air of mystery, and I think the blurb works really well. It gives you an idea of what it’s about, ithout revealing everything, which is just perfect.
Although it is early days, for this stage in the story the characters are already beginning to take some form. I can tell of Rosalie’s love for Max, and her sadness, and also get a glimpse of her personality, and her looks.
Quality of Writing: 9/10
Some sort of clichéd parts, and some areas where I felt the description and things were slightly lacking, but otherise this is reall good. The narrator has a strong voice, which I like, so keep it up! One thing to point out: The movella title I think should be 'Talking to Gravestones' with a small 't'.
Overall mark (I know I sound like a teacher): 8/10
Can’t wait to read more!