The Third Door [NaNoWriMo 2014]

"I died. Now I live. But I live within the boundaries of my head. What happens on the outside is beyond my control." Constructive criticism is very welcome on this. I will be updating in small sections, but I will probably republish this with proper chapter splits when I finish it. © 2014 Parsavagely


67. Chapter 14 Part 3 (End of Chapter 14)

A heavy hand leads the girl to the third door. He unlocks it slowly, unsure, afraid.

“Are you sure?” He asks. His voice quivers, showing weakness for the first time. She smiles at him, before replying.

“I’ve waited far too long; I can’t relive the pain again. I just have to get out of this room.” He nods, before wrapping his arms around her. A single tear rolls down his cheek and onto her shoulder. He releases her and slowly opens the door.

She steps through.

Her rags become whole again, forming an ebony dress around her. Her cuts close, her bruises fade away. The aching pains that had become part of her every moment vanish in an instant. She looks across the new world and sees…





She turns back just in time to see the door close.

She realises her mistake too late.

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