Long time no write! I was revisiting this fic and I realized: I literally suck at making plots. When I first started writing this story, I kind of just dove right into it, not knowing what I was doing, considering this was my first legit fan fiction of any kind. Now that I'm a slightly better writer and can think of better plots, I have decided to totally reconstruct this fan fiction. I will not be deleting the story and writing a new one because it will have the same main characters and titles. What I will do is delete all of the chapters currently here (so if you want to re read, I highly advise you to before Jan. 17) and post new ones. I will leave this update up so y'all have it.
Now, for my reconstruction. Here are the reasons I'm reconstructing:
1. Better Plot: The current plot isn't all that great and even I don't understand what is going on. I feel like I'm rambling now and I'm not really going anywhere with the story. I have now planned out what I want to do with the story.
2. Longer Chapters: I have always had short-ass chapters and I plan to try to make them longer.
3. Writing Style: I feel like my writing style has changed a bit so the chapters will vary if I continue the current plot.
4: Character Development: The characters aren't really doing anything. Like Ash and Jess just met, and now they're doing the dirty, which now leads to the last reason.
5: The Smut: Thanks to my best friend, I was shown was real smut was. Now I know what to write when I'm writing it.
So, without further ado, here is the description for the new and improved "The Boy in the Cafe."
Jessica is the new girl in town. After her family moves in, she visits a local cafe, and meets Ashton Irwin, the local murderer. Okay, he’s not a murderer, but he did put a man into a severe coma after getting into a car accident. Ashton was the drummer in the local rock band, 5 Seconds of Summer, which instantly split after the incident. Now, Ashton is hated throughout the town, and no one speaks to him at school, which causes him to be diagnosed with depression. When Ashton meets Jessica, he is finally able to be happy again, as long as she never discovers his biggest secret.
Alright, there we go! If y'all have any comments or questions, feel free to ask! Thank you all for sticking with me!
- iiridescentirwin xx