Mine sange

Dette er min måde at dele mine tekster på. Jeg vil rigtig gerne have feedback på dem :) Ved godt de fleste er lidt triste, men det er det jeg skriver bedst om. Det betyder ikke jeg er træt af mit liv. Jeg er glad for mit liv og alt hvad det indebærer, jeg har bare været igennem hårde tider.

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1. Can you hear me cry? skrevet sammen med Martin

You told me i was wrong,

different, ugly, poor,

I tried to stay strong,

but you made me sore,

I wanted to be like you,

but you left me in the cold,

maybe you´ve been here too,

frozen, broken, growing old.

Maybe you know the feeling,

I get inside when you say,

who do you think you are,

get out of my way,

cause you break and you take,

my happiness away,

do you know how it feels,

I just want to say.

 

That you make me,

feel like nothing at all,

and you break me,

can you see me fall,

and you take me,

to the edge of me mind,

you forsake me,

can you hear me cry?

 

Maybe you are right,

I am different inside,

that´s my major fright,

it´s getting harder to hide,

but ain´t that the thing,

nobody´s the same,

that´s why i´ll be king,

live my life my own way.

Maybe you know the feeling,

I get inside when you say,

who do you think you are?

get out of my way,

cause you break and you take,

my happiness away,

do you know how it feels,

I just want to say.

 

That you make me,

feel like nothing at all,

and you break me,

can you see me fall,

and you take me,

to the edge of me mind,

you forsake me,

can you hear me cry?

 

 

Maybe we are alike,

not that different at all,

maybe we could decide,

just to let it fall,

but that´s not going to be,

we are sworn enemies,

really I don´t see,

why you act like this.

 

Cause you make me,

feel like nothing at all,

and you break me,

can you see me fall,

and you take me,

to the edge of me mind,

you forsake me,

Oh, you make me,

feel like nothing at all,

and you break me,

can you see me fall,

and you take me,

to the edge of me mind,

you forsake me,

can you hear me cry?

 

***

 

Denne sang har jeg skrevet sammen med min ven Martin på min efterskole.

Den handler om mobning. Den er ikke skrevet til en bestemt bestemt person, men er mere en besked fra mobbeofret til mobberen om hvordan man har det, og sætter spørgsmålstegn ved hvorfor han/hun gør det her mig ofret.

Kom gerne med feedback :D 

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