3. book review: weird dramatic but love
Thanks @Hazzasloubear for letting me review your book!
Title: weird dramatic but love
What I thought:
Well it only had one chapter so I can't say much but
1. You misspelled one word. and I wouldn't call it misspelled but on a couple of words I'm guessing you forgot to use space. For example
You know what I mean?
And I didn't like the fact that on the first day Harry seen the girl they started going out
I think on the first chapter you should talk more about the girl character and that Harry couldn't take his eyes off of her. You know just add a little drama to the story but not too much that the readers get tired of it. But just enough for the readers to get stuck on the story.
But remember it's only the first chapter so please come back to me when you have a little more chapters up cause I would love to review it then too.
So I'll give you a 6! Congrats you did pretty good!
So thanks @hazzasoubear for letting me review your book I had fun!