Hi Shantez here and first I wanna say I'm supper, supper sorry it took me so long to review your book hope you're not mad at me
Thanks for letting me review your book!
Tittle: Princess Of Blood
Author(s): Annadima123 &, 1d And 5sos<3 &, CJ Horan
What I thought:
Well I really liked the style of the book and love the way you're going with it, I mean like who doesn't love one direction vampire stories? Right? But anyways I really liked it, but not to sound mean or anything
1. I don't know how to put this but you should've used "space" a little more like for example you put: "oh,you got your fangs a bit early!" You kept doing that and I didn't really like it
2. You kept putting text language (if that even makes sense) like for example you put: "1 sec" or "LOL" or "1 min" You know what I mean?
3. You didn't spell Lilly's name with a capital letter at the start you kept spelling it as: lilly
And sometimes you spelled the boy's without a capital letter too
4. You kept spelling some words with all capital letters and lots of exclamation marks, Like for example: BLUE!!!!!
And I didn't like that at all, for me you could put all capitals sometimes but not every chapter
5. Oh and sometimes you put this face: :0
You should take those out
But besides those I really liked the book! You did great!
So I'll give you a 5! Congrats!