8. book review: From Past To Present
Thanks @Kaitie_gray for letting me review you book!
First I wanna say that I'm sorry it took me so long to review your story, I had so much stuff on my hands lately
Title: From past to present
What I thought:
I really like the book but
1. You should of use like a little more periods
2. I notice when you spelled some words you use like text language, if that even made sense. Like if you spelled "you" you would of put "u"
3. I notice you didn't really used apostrophe, so maybe go back and try to fix it
4. You did have spelling mistakes
5. When I was reading the story I noticed that you didn't spell some of the boy's names with a capital letter. Like you would spell Liam's name: liam
So I'll rate you a 6
Congrats! You did good, but just go back to the story and try to fix some if the mistakes
A/N: ok guys so when I rate your books just remember I'm not saying that I'm professional or anything. I'm just trying to help you with mistakes in your book. So please don't think that I think I'm all that, or my books are the bomb cause if you look at my books you can see their not really that good.
So yeah bye ✌️