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8. book review: From Past To Present

Thanks @Kaitie_gray for letting me review you book!

First I wanna say that I'm sorry it took me so long to review your story, I had so much stuff on my hands lately

Title: From past to present

Author: Kaitie_gray

What I thought:

I really like the book but

1. You should of use like a little more periods

2. I notice when you spelled some words you use like text language, if that even made sense. Like if you spelled "you" you would of put "u"

3. I notice you didn't really used apostrophe, so maybe go back and try to fix it

4. You did have spelling mistakes

5. When I was reading the story I noticed that you didn't spell some of the boy's names with a capital letter. Like you would spell Liam's name: liam

So I'll rate you a 6

Congrats! You did good, but just go back to the story and try to fix some if the mistakes

A/N: ok guys so when I rate your books just remember I'm not saying that I'm professional or anything. I'm just trying to help you with mistakes in your book. So please don't think that I think I'm all that, or my books are the bomb cause if you look at my books you can see their not really that good.

So yeah bye ✌️

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