24. Book review: Ally(way) L.H
Hii so it's Amour Tay Tay here!
Thanks sxper_Fangirl for letting me review your book!
Title: Ally(way) L.H
What I thought:
Well first I don't like it.... I LOVE IT!
It's great! I love the way you're writing the story!
But you had only the three littlest mistakes,
1. You said; "what's wrong?" I sak him" and you should fix that little mistake with "sak" and put "asked".
2. You spelled dinner wrong. You put; "diner".
3. The fist chapter I felt like it was kinda long, you should've made it like two chapters. You know what I mean? XD
But everything else, I LOVED. The blurb, the cover, everything else was interesting to me!
So I'll give you a 9!
Congrats you did great! :)