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24. Book review: Ally(way) L.H

Hii so it's Amour Tay Tay here!

Thanks sxper_Fangirl for letting me review your book!

Title: Ally(way) L.H

Author: sxper_Fangirl

What I thought:

Well first I don't like it.... I LOVE IT!

It's great! I love the way you're writing the story!

But you had only the three littlest mistakes,

1. You said; "what's wrong?" I sak him" and you should fix that little mistake with "sak" and put "asked".

2. You spelled dinner wrong. You put; "diner".

3. The fist chapter I felt like it was kinda long, you should've made it like two chapters. You know what I mean? XD

But everything else, I LOVED. The blurb, the cover, everything else was interesting to me!

So I'll give you a 9!

Congrats you did great! :)

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