Before I Met You, Louis Tomlinson.

Seventeen year old writer, Ellen Aprils is displayed affection in a new light, but her dreadful past forces her to push it to the back of her mind and tell herself the feels aren’t there. Ellen keeps a journal and is told from a young age to keep her emotions together by putting her feelings on paper, before Louis came along she didn’t know what love and heart break was. The young writer leaving her family, friends and first love in Australia to join a school in London to progress a future in writing. She starts her life and thinks she has Louis place behind her but it’s when she heads to a party with her neighbour, Liam that her and Louis are reunited, she experiences things like non other after Louis and her pursue there once dead end relationship.


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Ellen’s POV

Two days later

I was feeling better the only evidence of me ever being sick is the slight cough I am yet to get rid of, the police called me yesterday telling me Dan was arrested at my apartment building, he never made it up to the floor and was taken into custody at the door, Louis was picking my up from school in about half an hour and we were going to go collect my things from his place and take them back to mine.

I get into Louis’ car, pecking his lips and doing my belt up as he starts to drive off, we get to his house and head into his room, his mum was a work and his sisters were in the lounge room watching TV, We throw all my things into the suit case and grabbed it going out to the car, after saying bye to his family, we made our way to the building and into the underground garage, taking the bag up in the elevator to my apartment where I unlocked to door to find it in the same condition we left it not even two weeks ago, Louis and I went into my bedroom, me packing my things way while talking to one another, there was a knock at the door and Louis offered to get it, when I walked out of the bedroom part of the apartment and into the main room Liam and Louis were talking each with a cat in their arms, I make my way towards them and take Bandit from Liam, hugging him close to me while I pat him.

“Thank you for taking care of them.” I smile at him.

“No problem.” He replies, “I’ll just go get there things.” He tells me and I nod, I go towards the lounge and sit down, Bandit jumping down out of my arms and franticly rubbing against my legs.

“I think he missed you.” Louis said and I smile watching him, once he calmed down he started sniffing my shoes then my clothes obviously trying to figure out where I have been, he tongue sticking out ever so slightly as he looks up at me, causing me to laugh, Liam brings the things back over and I place them all where they use to go, the kitty litter tray in the bathroom, the food and water dish in the kitchen and there toys just randomly in the middle or the room.


I stood at the foot of my bed, Louis came up behind me, my body jumping slightly as his fingers pushed my hair to the side. Soft lips were pressed to the skin of my neck, nibbling and sucking, I was suddenly spun around to face him, my chest rising and falling heavily. Louis could tell how nervous I was as he took my trembling hands in his large ones. He kept eye contact with me as he brought one hand up to his mouth, leaving a light kiss on the skin.

“I’ll be gentle.” He whispered, I watched him kick his Toms off before slowly kneeling down in front of me. His hands caressed the skin of my right thigh as he slid his touch down my leg. I couldn’t take my eyes off him. “So soft.” He mumbled into the kisses that were left down my tingling skin, trailing back up he hooks his fingers into the waist band of my shorts, sliding them down delicately before I stepped out of them letting him toss them to the side. My leg was raised, hands gripping onto Louis’ shoulders as he took my shoe off. The process was repeated with the other foot, before he stood to his full height in front of me. Louis’ head flicked to my large bed, instructing me to hop on it.

He pulled me up so I was kneeling, sat up on the bed, my body facing away from him as he knelt behind me. A strong arm wrapped around my waist, decreasing the distance between us as my back pressed to his front. His lips hummed in my ear as I rolled my head back to his shoulder, my body tensed as I felt his hand cup my breast, gently squeezing as he went down. Louis’ touch sent tingles through my body, his strong arm held me as I squirmed against him, he skimmed his warm hand up the inside of my thigh. A whimper fell from my lips as Louis’ fingers lightly touched me over my underwear, he began to rub over the sensitive area as my hips moved with the touch. I struggled to draw in breath, the feeling of his fingers jumbling my thoughts. My backside rubbed against his crotch as he increased the pressure, all the while his raspy voice whispered dirty things into my ear, it shocked me slightly as he told me all the things he wanted to do to me.

“Louis.” I breathily gasped, he groaned, his fingers then slipping into the front of my underwear. I cried out in surprise, no-one had ever touched me that way before, my body began to slump against his, my shaking legs finding it difficult to keep me up, even though my back was still pressed firmly to his front. Louis’ thumb gently moving over my clit, eliciting whimpers from my parted lips.

“Mmm.” He huskily whispered into my ear, hot kisses were trailed down my neck as he continued to pleasure me. It startled me a little as Louis shifted, taking me with him as he sat on the edge of the bed. I still faced away from him, sitting on his lap. “Up.” He instructed.

I complied, lifting my hips slightly as he hitched my shirt up higher, it being longer then a regular t shirt. Louis’ larger hands caught hold of my thighs, spreading them so my legs hung either side of his lap, my head lazily turned to catch a glimpse of Louis bringing his fingers up to his mouth. He sucked on them before pulling them out, rough fingertips ran up the inside of my thighs before they dipped into my underwear again. But this time his middle finger teased my entrance, I knew he was being careful, easing the finger in gently, but it didn’t stop the small uncomfortable moans falling from my mouth. My head rested back on his shoulder again, struggling to breathe as he pushed in deeper. His strong arm gripped my waist in an attempt to stop me from wriggling. “Good girl.” He whispered into my ear. My body flinched as his finger swirled around before he slowly drew it out and pushed back in again, the steady pace allowed me to feel the ridges and joints in his finger, I felt Louis’ chest rise and fall quickly, his heart beat thumping into my back.

“Does that feel good?” He softly asks, his knees parted my legs wider. “Ellen.” Louis wants an answer. I couldn’t speak, but my hand gripped his forearm, squeezing it. The pleasure pulsing through my body was overpowering, my lashes fluttering finding it difficult to keep my eyes open. Louis withdrew his presence, leaving wet kisses on my shoulder, he suddenly gripped my hips, pushing me up so he could stand, large hands caught hold of my upper arms, spinning me around and nudging me back to the bed.

“Sit.” He says guiding me down, I sat on the end of the mattress, not really sure what he was going to do next. Louis crouched down in front of me so we were at eye level. His forehead pressed to mine, his sparkling blue orbs not leaving my own, I flinched as he reached out and pushed my underwear to the side, a long finger nudging into me again. His lips curved up upon witnessing my struggle for breath, seconds later it was pulled out, Louis moved back slightly and I watched as he brought the finger up to his mouth, my eyes widened as his soft lips wrapped around his index finger, taking it into his mouth and sucking, he hummed before withdrawing, his pink tongue sliding out and over his lips.

“Oh god.” He breathed. “I want to taste you properly.” My body froze at his words, he stood to his full height as he instructed me to move back, I shuffled away from him as he crawled onto the bottom of the bed. “Not so far.” He chuckled., larger hands gripped my ankles before he effortlessly pulled me towards him, Louis hovered over me, his lips pressing to mine in a forceful kiss before trailing along my jaw to my ear. His teeth nibbled the lobe as my fingertips dug into his shoulders, Louis divided my attention as I felt his fingers loop into the sides of my panties. He didn’t wait before slowly tugging them down my legs, my knees drew up to my chest, I felt my cheeks tingle with heat, he dropping the material to the floor, his strength overpowered mine as he carefully pried my thighs apart. He brought his bottom lip between his teeth as he scanned over me before his gaze travelled up to my face, a smirk spread on his mouth before he spoke. “Touch yourself.” I raised an eyebrow.


“I want to see you touch yourself.” His voice is deep, unrecognisable. He grabbed my hand, tugging it down in between my legs, I gasped at his actions. He raised his eyebrows, nodding at me to continue. “Go on.” He encouraged, I squeezed my eyes closed, unable to look at him as I slowly moved my fingers back and forth over my tingling womanhood. Louis’ heavy breathing could be heard, my face was splashed with pink, I tried to focus on my touch and block him out, but I found it difficult as I knew Louis was intently observing, I brushed my fingers over my most sensitive spot, lightly gasping at my own actions. “Holy shit.” Louis almost groaned.

My eyes shot open when Louis gripped my wrist pulling it away from myself, his patience wearing thin, not being able to wait any longer. “I’m gonna make you feel so good.” He moaned, his soft hair tickled the inside of my thighs as he lowered his head. A gasp escaped my lips, Louis nipped at the skin on my legs before I felt his hot breath fan over me. His head tilted up and connected with my nervous gaze. A grin was plastered on his face as he winked at me. Seconds later I felt his warm tongue lick up my centre, his larger hands instantly went to restrain my thighs, keeping them apart so he could continue. I couldn’t control the whimpers and soft moans falling from my lips. It seemed to please Louis as he hummed against me, he found it amusing that I didn’t know where to place my hands until I settled with one fisting the sheets and the other wound into his hair. I heard and felt his moan against me as I tightened my hold in his hair, tugging slightly, the vibrations adding to the sensation, a small shriek escaped my mouth as his tongue darted out into my entrance, Louis seemed to be satisfied with my reaction as he repeated the pleasuring movement.

I loudly gasped as his nose brushed my clit, he laughed lightly then flicked the end of his tongue against it, pleasure shot through my body, my back arching up from the mattress, Louis drew back, watching for a few seconds before leaning down again. “Louis.” I whimpered, he didn’t stop, his tongue and mouth working together as my chest rose up and down quickly, soft lips wrapped around my most sensitive spot before he sucked. My body jolted with the new sensation, my breathing heavy and trembling from my parted lips, one of his hands left my thigh, his long middle finger teasing my entrance before slowly easing it in, my head rolled to the side, enable to do anything but feel as he pumped it in and out whilst sweeping his tongue across my clit.

My head turned back at the loss of Louis’ contact, his face came up from between my shaking legs, I watched as he licked my excitement off his pink lips, before smirking at me, he moved further up my body, one hand supporting his weight as he hovered above me, the other resting on my hip, his now dark eyes flicked from my wide orbs down to my lips. Louis’ mouth pressed to mine in a desperate kiss, his tongue forcing itself between my parted lips, I felt him laugh slightly as I gasped into him, his hand moving from my hip back to my centre. A few strokes were swept over my entrance before his finger pushed back in, our mouths parted as he withdrew, Louis intently watched as I struggled to breathe beneath him, forcing a surprised whimper from my lips as his finger pushed a little deeper, his speed increased. “Does that feel good?” His hair tickled my forehead as he came down closer to me.

My hips shifted under him, squirming with his pleasuring movements, I squeezed my eyes closed as I felt a heat rise in my stomach, my thighs attempted to clamp shut but Louis’ body hovering between my legs prevented me from doing so. He could tell I was nearly there, I felt him decrease the distance between us, lowering his body down onto his forearm. “Look at me.” He whispered, my eyes fluttered open, dark blue, lust filled orbs staring down at me.

“Louis… Louis.” I whimpered softly, my lips parted, short, sharp breaths forced out.

“Come for me… You’re safe.” He whispered, I grabbed onto his hand, Louis quickly intertwined our fingers as I struggled for air, his head went into the crook of my neck, kissing and sucking on the clammy skin, I squeezed his hand tighter as waves of pleasure burst through my trembling body. “Ellen.” Louis mumbled into my neck, I squeezed my eyes shut, the feeling overwhelming as Louis continued to pump his long finger in and out, his thumb rubbing circles over my clit as pink lips moved to my ear. “I’ll keep you safe.” His raspy voice tells me quietly.

My free hand grabbed hold of the back of his neck, keeping him against me as he kissed the spot behind my ear, my back arched up from the bed and into his body. “Oh god.” I moaned, I had never had such an intense feeling, Louis’ touch tipping me over the edge, to reveal me in my most vulnerable state. My mouth parted to release broken gasps, slowly the tingly subsided, my body becoming exhausted as I fell back to the mattress. Louis held me close, almost as if he was afraid I would disappear, soft kisses were left along my jaw until his mouth met mine, my actions were lazy, unable to put much effort into the kiss after what he had just done to me. “Good girl.” He whispered.

My eyelashes fluttered, body still holding on to what was left of the feeling, Louis’ knuckles dragged across my thighs as he slowly pulled the hem of my long shirt down, covering me, my hips were held as he rolled us over, my limp body sprawled on top of his, the rise and fall of my chest began to even out as I rested all my weight on Louis. My head to the side, ear pressed to his chest as I listened to his thumping heartbeat one arm wrapped protectively around my back and his free hand combed soothingly through my hair, Louis shifted slightly, moving us further up the bed, my fingers tightly fisting his t-shirt between my fingers. “Louis.” I whimpered.

My arms clung around his neck, not willing to let him go, he settled onto the pillows, my body still draped over his. “Shhh.” He quietly soothed, kissing the top of my head, we laid like that for a while longer, the only sounds heard were of our steady breathing, my fingers wiggled under the hem of his shirt, wanting to feel his soft skin, he hummed as I traced small circles on his hip just above the band of his briefs.

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