My name's Eleanor Calder, you may know me as Louis Tomlinson's girlfriend. This is the story, my story on how I was murdered and literally stabbed in the back. My advice? Keep distance within friends, family, and especially strangers

(Really R but couldn't set it)


8. chapter 6

Eleanor's P.O.V

I was looking through the racks when I felt a hand on my hips for the third time today. I knew it was Louis and I turned around to kiss him. It felt good to have his lips on mine again and no one else's.

"Ready to go love?" he said handing me a caramel frappe' which I took and drank.

"Mhm, lemme just go get my purse." I said walking to the storage room.

"Hannah, Louis' here, here's the key for the store." I handed her the keys.

"Thanks, have fun you two" she said smiling back.

I walked out the store and towards the mall's entrance, as soon as I got through the doors I started to feel the heat of the sun boiling on my skin. I didn't realize how hot is was going to be since the mall had an air conditioner through out the place. I drank my frappe' some more and got in Louis' car.

"I didn't know how hot it was babe." I said putting my shades on.

"Yeah I know, I apologize for coming outside" he winked.

I laughed, Louis always has a great sense of humor no matter what.

"Here lemme put the AC on." He put his key in the ignition and started to drive.

"You got your swim suite love?"

"Yeah it's in my purse" I said pointing to my purse which was on my lap.

'I knew you were trouble when you walked shame on me now' the radio spoke out the words and tune of Taylor Swift.

"Holy Styles." Louis said reaching to change the channels. I moved his hand and changed the channel for him.

"Keep both hands on the wheel Mrs. Tomlinson" I teased and stuck my tongue out at him.

At The Beach

Louis' P.O.V

"Eleanor, you're going to have to get in the water weather you like it or not." I said leaning on top of her and pressed a sweet kiss upon her soft lips.

"It's cold Louis..." she whined, I didn't bring her here to start her whining and shit so I grabbed her and picked her up carrying her bridal style towards the water.

"Louis stop!" she screamed, she held onto my neck, her grip tight. I looked into her brown eyes that shinned in the sun light. I smiled at her and threw her in the ocean blue water.

"Louis seriously!" she said splashing me. I splashed her right back.

"Seriously, yes, seriously." I nodded and made a funny face.

I grabbed held her up, her body facing me with her legs wrapped around my waist. I kissed her gently begging for my tongue to entire her mouth with she granted and moaned back into the kiss. I squeezed her bum and hip thrusted a little bit causing my willy to bounce up with excitement. I then pressed my chest harder onto her breasts and bit down on her bottom lip.

Eleanor's P.O.V

The kiss ended and we both smiled. I got out of the water and walked onto the beach where our towel were and layed there for a minute.

"Let's take a picture." Louis said getting his phone out of his jeans' pocket which layed in the sand.

"Alright" I got up and stood next to him and smiled a little cheesy than usual.

"Per-ect" Louis teased, I laughed and he slapped my bum softly.

I layed back on our towel and sighed waiting to be a sexy tan like those girls in the movies. Louis layed on top of me.

"Louis..babe, you're blocking the sun." I giggled kissing his nose.

"You don't need to tan, you're beautiful." We kissed again and Louis rocked his hips back and forth making me wet and turning me on.

I moaned and ran my fingers through his hair. I went up to get air and that's when I saw her. Red coat. I glanced over, it was pretty obvious that this wasn't a coincidence. She still wore her red coat and had her mask on. Chills ran down my spine.

Louis looked at me "Everything okay love?"

"Yeah." I said turning back to him and gave him a quick kiss before returning my eyes to where red coat stood. And there it was...nothing. She was gone. I became tense and looked around.


Eleanor's P.O.V

"Eleanor you'll regret this." he yelled back ",and that's a fucking promise." chills ran down my back. I looked blankly at Zayn.

-Flashback Ends-

"You sure you're okay?"

"Yes baby, sorry. Where were we?" I smiled and returned to making out with him. Louis then started to take his swim trunks off.

I gasped and grave him a surprised looked. He chuckled a little bit and put them pull them back up.

"Let's head to the beach condo I rented for us to stay." I got up and grabbed out umbrella and he grabbed the towels and cooler.

"You got us a beach condo?", wow he really wanted me to feel special.

I love him for that, making me get the best of gifts and treatment and making me feel special. I followed him to the car and put the umbrella in the trunk. I sat in the front seat and looked around to see if red coat was still around. No cars were parked around, not many people and definitely no red coat. If Evan was red coat, what was his motto? Was this his way of getting me back..creeping me out? I shrugged and held Louis' warm hand and looked out the window.

"I love you Louis." I said.

"I love you too Eleanor." he said back smiling sweetly his blue eyes beamed.

Killer's P.O.V

I sat on the bench smiling at old people who walked by and took off my hoodie since it was burning like hell outside. I looked at my camera at the video I got of Eleanor leaving work and smiled. What a pretty little girl, sad she has to die. Just then I got a call. I answered.

"I'm working." I said sternly.

"What's Eleanor and Louis doing?"

"They just left and took the road not from here."

"Follow them dude."

"For what you know what they're doing." I raised an eyebrow.

"I know you're smiling you cheeky bastard."


"One day I'm gonna pop those dimples out of your cheeks." I said looking at the palm trees.

"Alright, talk to you later."

"Uh huh."

I chewed my gum loudly and blew some bubbles feeling the breeze through my hair. Which I didn't like one bit because I take a lot of time on my hair. Gotta stay sexy ya know. I lit a cigarette and inhaled blowing it to the side.I got up and walked around for bit. Wouldn't kill anyone...right?

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