25. My name is Peeta Mellark by Bella<3Edward#TWILIGHT
Title: My name is Peeta Mellark
Genre: Fanfiction- Hunger Games Fanfiction
Some of the similes used are fantastic, and the first part of the chapter is incredibly descriptive!
Peeta- Telling the story
Katniss- His love
Snow- the person Peeta hates
A guard- well, a guard...
Why You Should Read It:
For all those people who like the Hunger Games, this is definitely for you! The use of description is really good and vivid.
Some Little Tips:
~At the end, it's a little confusing. Why is he repeating that sentence? Why does the second have a comma?
~Make sure at the dramatic sections, you increase the tension. The deal with Snow seems to fast, slow it down and add in some of that description which was so fantastic at the start!
Link to the Movella: http://www.movellas.com/story/201412012343070825-my-name-is-peeta-mellark
Link to the author: http://www.movellas.com/user/chlookies