14. Iris by MereCat
The first chapter (the prologue) is probably one of the most beautifully written chapters I have ever read on this website. It actually reminded me of Looking For Alaska and how Miles thinks of her. The language used is all correct and emphasises the characters thoughts and personalities.
Iris- A mysterious girl/ a flower
Dan- Older brother
Matt- Older brother
Dad- His, well, Dad...
Mum- His Mum...
Cerian- Jac's girlfriend
Jac- a friend
Aron- a friend
Why You Should Read It:
The writing and language used is amazing and I love the characters too. Everything about this movella is beautiful, I think you should finish it!
Link to movella: http://www.movellas.com/story/201406302225192946-iris
Link to author: http://www.movellas.com/user/merecat