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31. Harry Potter and the Secret Monster


Title: Harry Potter and the Secret Monster

Author: Watch Nimbus.171

Genre: Fanfiction-Harry Potter Fanfiction

 

Good Points:

The paragraph at the beginning is beautiful. I love the personification and similes especially! It really paints an amazing picture in your mind.

 

Characters:

Meera Sharma- A young girl

Sheila- an old woman

 

Why You Should Read It:

The description is powerful and fantastic. Although there are only two characters, it seems interesting. You need to update!

 

CC:

I would get rid of the picture. Your description is powerful and paints a picture anyway, there is no need for an addition! It also replaces the power of the imagination and the picture it created with a solid image.

 

Link to Movella: http://www.movellas.com/story/201407121019174676-harry-potter-and-the-secret-monster

Link to Author: http://www.movellas.com/user/watch.nimbus

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