29. An Investigation Of Crows by TheTravellingLemon
Title: An Investigation Of Crows
Genre: Mystery and Suspense
It's an interesting view on crows, on birds and names in general, and differences. I love TheTravellingLemon for doing the amazing Remember Me and now she has made this stupendous Movella!
Mrs Atkin- lives on the corner of Russel Street
Cora- One of the crows
Beaky- One of the crows
Why You Should Read It:
It's really cool and an entirely different take on the views of birds, giving them human characteristics. Update!
You put 'Russel street'. It should be 'Russel Street'.
You said 'loan' I think it's 'lone'.
You have a lot of full stops at the end of your speech and then capital letters for the additional section. Change it to a comma and lower case, so it all fits in as one sentence.
Link to the Movella: http://www.movellas.com/story/201412181252493911-an-investigation-of-crows
Link to Author: http://www.movellas.com/story/201412181252493911-an-investigation-of-crows