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8. Shattered Souls

Shattered Souls

By: Chloe_123_x

A beautifully written movella! It really grabbed my attention from the beginning! Every one should have the opportunity to read it!

It was a great short read. If you described how the boy looked I think that would be the icing on the cake. It would be cool if you gave more information on what he was excepting because I was a bit confused. It mentioned his family but more elaboration would be nice.

Sorry about the short review but the list is getting long.

COVER: 10/10

I don't think I could have made it better. Well done!

TITLE MATCHING STORY: 8/10

Shattered souls was never mentioned in the story so far. When it is the score will be higher.

BLURB: 8.5/10

It didn't have much relation to the story but it did rope me in.

PLOT AND STORY: 9/10

Very original! It could have used more detail about the Main Character but that's it. Great job!

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING: 10/10

I don't usually award high points for this category. Awesome!

FINAL RATING: 9.1/10

I love this story and if you are reading this right now check out "Shattered Souls" it's a quick read but it's very interesting.

Great job, Chloe_123_x!!!

❤️⚾️❤️TheStoryTeller (I changed my username)

Ps- I am a tough judge but I really loved this!

A/N: from now on reviews will be shorter. Sorry, I just don't have time. If your story is over fifteen minutes I will only read the first two or three chapters. Thx.

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