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2. The Barbie Project by Mirlotta

 

JUNE 2014 MOVELLA OF THE MONTH

 

THIS REVIEW CONTAINS *SPOILERS*!

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          Let me start out my saying I really loved the cover so cutos to whoever made it! I’m going to start out by saying the things I didn’t like.

          I do have to say that you did very well with developing Ethel’s character into this nerdy girl who then tries different things to fit in, but it starting to find out that it’s not all that it’s cracked up to be.

          But at some parts of the book I am feeling that it’s taking more of a Mean Girls type of turn and it’s something that you see in a lot of Realistic Fiction books these days. So, try to make it more YOU! Maybe make the whole thing have a big twist ending but don’t let me tell you what to write. I know you’ll think of something great.

          Also, I still don’t know whether I like Lysander or Gary both at all. They both see a little strange from what you’ve revealed about their characters so far.  For future reference as you continue to write this book, if Ethel/Elle is going to end up with somebody by the end of the book, try to make them seem a little more promising for Ethel’s…I guess you could say love life. I mean, Lysander cut her face, for reasons I still don’t quite understand. And Gary, from the information we know, sounds like a nice guy, but seems just like a weird stalker.

          But other than that, I only saw a few typos. Nothing extreme though. Which means you did a great job at editing! Plus the story is all around exciting. I can’t wait to see what Ethel’s parents are going to have to talk to her about!

I give this movella a rating of

8 Barbie Dolls out of 10


 

 

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