The Dead Walking 4

(This is the 4th book in The Dead Walking series) I hate death. Its not even the fact someone died really its the after math when you look back and think "maybe I could have done something" and it just eats away at you until you cant take it anymore. And it seems no one really understands it, but you so you are left to face it alone. Just like you're left to face everything else alone now because we're all just monsters too.


10. Question???

      You're probably wondering why I am doing another notification thingy since I just did one 2 chapters ago, but I have an important question...

    Do you think I am doing the fighting scenes okay? If not what can I do to improve them?

   I feel like my fighting scenes are just plain horrible and I'm not sure whether you guys are enjoying them or not. I would love to hear your guy's opinions. Even if you don't like them or you think they could be better please tell me! I would hate to have a crappy book and never know that everyone else thought it was crappy too.

  Okay so that is my question. Let me know what you think so I can improve it or if it doesn't need improving then at least I know you guys like it.




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