Things Just Happen

This is a rant book, where I can just put on issues that I come across day by day, which'll help me, but hopefully you too :) x
*Warning* will contain swearing.

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9. It's finished!

This is about the Movella I published before this, called Tell Me. If you haven't read it, then read it, or just read below. Those of you who have read it, well you'll know what I'm talking about. The story I wrote that for is finished! Hip hip hooray! I'm going to publish it on here in a couple of minutes for you guys to read, because it's due in after 4 days, so I need some constructive criticism before I hand it in. I really, really want this story to be good, because it is literally the only story I've finished off completely in the past two years, and well... it's important to me that I get it as best as I can. So if you do have any criticisms, go ahead and list them all, because I need them to improve my story. I know it's pretty crappy anyway, but hey, anything I can do to make it better, right? Plus, if you've read Tell Me, then you don't need to read the bit below.

 

People who haven't read Tell Me

I have a piece of homework due in on Friday in Ethics and Philosophy, and it's a creative writing task. Our topic at the moment is Human Rights, and my group were given the scenario, "A new student has arrived at your school and he/she is a gypsy. The other students in your class are making fun of them, what would you do?"

So I wrote a piece on that - I think it's longer than it's meant to be, it's only meant to be a page long, but oh well. But yeah, I'm writing from the new kid's point of view, and I'd like to hear what you'd like to say about it! Like I said above, criticism is more than welcome, since it's pretty crappy anyway, but anything I can do to make it better, I will. If you decide to read it, then thanks!

Keep believing in yourself, you will get there one day!

Vach xx

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