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Jamie and Tristan have been best friends for as long as they could remember. That is until Tristan confesses his feelings for Jamie, how does she feel about this?
On top of that Amber the schools 'it' girl decides to give Tristan a makeover that leaves him cocky as ever.

Sneak peak...
~I remember his words, and the expression on his face, as if he were right in front of me.
"I love you, i always have, but i was too scared to tell you."
What a lie...
If he really loved me, he wouldn't have betrayed me.~



~Tristan's POV~

The thud on the ground startled me and i turned around to find Jamie on the floor, thankfully she didn't fall down the stairs.

I lifted her into my arms and started thinking, trying to smash the door down wasn't going to help us.

Then it clicked, we have cell phones! We were in such a panic that we completely forgot.

Our phones were both somewhere on the couch. I set Jamie down by the door and made my way down the stairs as quickly as i could.

I stopped abruptly in my tracks, there was no way to get to the couch, there was a wall a fire blocking it.

Fortunately it wasn't too high, i would be able to jump over it.

I took a few steps back and ran toward the fire, pushing myself off the ground.

I landed with a thud and frantically searched for one of the phones.

A serge of pain shot through my foot as a patted the cushions.

I looked down at my foot and immediately regretted it, as it was on fire.

I must have just skimmed the fire.

My hand felt something cool and my fingers wrapped around it.

It was Jamie's phone.

I typed in 9-1-1 and reached out in search of my glass of water. When i came in contact with it i quickly dumped it on my foot, letting out a breath that i didn't realize i was holding.

"Nine one one what's your emergency?" A women said on the other end.

"F-ire." I chocked out, trying not to let any smoke in.

"We will track down the call and be over as soon as possible, hold tight."

The line went dead.

I collapsed on the ground and dialled Jamie's mom.

"Hello?" She said.

I opened my mouth to reply but nothing came out.

Instead i had a coughing fit.

"Jamie, what's wrong sweetie?" She asked a little scared.

It was becoming difficult to breath, but i couldn't black out, i needed to get back to Jamie.

But i had no say, my body had a mind of its own and decided it was time to shut down.

"Jamie your scaring me, what's going on?!"

"Hel-p." I whispered as everything went black.

~Jamie's POV~

"My baby!"

I woke up to the sound of loud sobs and sirens.

"Thank God your alive!" I heard my mom, but i couldn't see her.

"You are very lucky, we came just in time." A young lady said from one end of the stretcher that was carrying me.

"Hi honey." My mom said walking along us with a tear stained face.

"When we get to the hospital i'll fill you in okay?"

I nodded knowing my voice would be rough.

I wondered where Tristan was.

A police walked up to my mom. "We confirmed that the fire was indeed not an accident. Do you know anyone who would do this?"

"I can't think of anyone." My mom said turning to me.

"Amb-er greens-burg." I chocked out.

The police took out a pad and wrote down her name. "We'll look into it." He said before walking off.

I closed my eyes once more drifting off.


I awoke in a hospital bed, for the second time in the past few weeks.

My mom sat in a chair beside me.

"Good morning Jamie."

"Morning." I croaked, my throat sore.

"I have some good news." She said.

"There was a lighter in the basement and it had that girls fingerprints on it! Also you will be able to leave tonight, they just had to clear out your lungs."

I smiled knowing that Amber would no longer be harming me or Tristan...Tristan!

"Where's Tristan?!" I asked.

"He's next door, his foot was badly burned and he hasn't woken up yet, but the doctor said he will, we just have to give him some time." She said. "Your very lucky that he got to your phone, i would have gotten home too late if it weren't for him." Tears gathered in her eyes.

"Its okay mom." I said holding her hand.

Tristan had managed to call for help. It never crossed her mind to use their phones.

"Will i be able to see him after?" I asked.

"Yes, but for now you need to rest."



Around seven a nurse came into my room.

"You can visit your friend now, if you like."

"Yes, thank you." I said as i got out of bed.

I grab my glasses from the table beside me and put them on.

"How are you feeling?" She asked helping me.

"A lot better, my throats a bit sore though." I said as we entered the hallway.

"Your really lucky they came when they did." She says.

"So I've been told." I say smiling.

I enter Tristan's room where he lays motionless on a hospital bed.

I was so focused on him i didn't even see his mom.

"Hi Linda." I say.

"Jamie, hi, how are you?" She says giving me a hug.

"Better." I say.

"I'll leave you with him. Where is your mom at?"

"Thanks. She should be in the waiting room."

"Okay, I'll be back soon, call the nurse if anything goes wrong."

"Alright." I say taking the seat next to Tristan.

He looked so peaceful, as peaceful you can look in a hospital.

"Hey Tristan, that was some movie night." I say knowing he can't hear me.

I take his hand in mine and rub tiny circles on the back of his hand.

I use his state to my advantage and take in his features.

His hair was messed up from sleeping. His slightly freckled nose and thin lips. He looked paler then he usually did and didn't have his usual rosy red cheeks.

I laid my head on his chest and closed my eyes, listening to his heartbeat.

All at once his breathing became raged and i immediately shot up and pressed the button on the side of the bed calling for a nurse.

"Tristan don't die on me now." I whispered as a tear rolled down my cheek.

The nurse walked in and i said, "He's not breathing properly."

"Okay, could you please step out maybe get his mom." She said pressing buttons on the machine he was hooked up to.

I couldn't move, i was paralyzed with fear.

I couldn't lose Tristan. He's the only person who truly understands me.

"His lungs are failing." The nurse said to herself. She must have thought that i left.

Tristan's eyes fluttered open, but he was still struggling.

He looked terrified and confused.

I wanted to run to him burry my head in his chest.

"Take deep breaths." The nurse said calmly.

Tristan breathed in and out slowly making progress.

His eyes wondered the room until they fell on me.

"Ja-mie." He said causing him pain.

The nurse turned to me surprised.

"I'm sorry i just couldn't will myself to leave." I say.

"Its alright, it was nothing to serious, he seemed to recover. I'm going to go find his mom and tell her what happened. I'll let you two catch up." She said with a wink.

I felt myself blush.

"Hey, how are you feeling?" I asked.

"I'm okay." He said softly, barley audible.

"You almost gave me a heart attack just now."

"Well your in the right place." He says with a grin.

"Did they tell you anything about my foot?" He asked.

"My mom told me that you won't be able to walk on it for a couple days, it wasn't badly burned." I say.

"Its funny how we were celebrating you getting your walking cast off and now I'm the one with an injured foot."

"I guess we just partied to hard." I said laughing.

Tristan chuckled.

"Can you pass me my nerd specks." He said pointing to his glasses.

I handed them to him.

"Thanks. Now i can see your every detail." He says and i blush.

"While i was resting, i was thinking that when we get out of here we go on a date, like a full one." I say.

"What about Amber?" He asks a little scared.

"She got busted, she's going to be sent to prison."

"Really! That takes some pressure of my chest." He says. "I would love to take you up on your offer."

I giggle and stare into his green eyes.

"Could you just kiss me already?" He asked a smirk on his face.

"What if i don't want to." I say leaning towards him.

"Well you don't have much of a choice." He says closing the gap.

He pulled back first grinning like an idiot.

"I love you Jamie." He said, his eyes sparkling.

I surprised him and myself when i responded, "I love you too, Tristan."

"Tamie forever?" He asked.

I give him a confused look and he added, "Thats our couple name."

I laughed. "Your too adorable." He blushed.

"We will forever be Tamie!"

I pulled him to me again, trying to capture every detail of the moment, so that i could cherish it forever.


Hello awesome readers!

That is the end of Betrayed! I hope you enjoyed it, i sure enjoyed writing it! Please let me know what you think of the last chapter.

I was wondering if you guys wanted me to put a chapter where i can show you what the main characters look like. If so please comment telling me that you do.

Also should i write an epilogue, showing Tamie in the future? Once again comment if you do.




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