The New Arrival (Super 8)

Basically, this is my attempt at writing the first main body of the 2011 J.J. Abrams and Steven Spielberg Sci-Fi thriller film 'Super 8'.
The storyline is mostly their work with a few of my ideas added in. *The characters have different names*
Some speech is taken directly from the script.

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6. Chapter Six

Frightened and lying in the dust and debris, Joel had his eyes firmly shut, wishing, hoping to escape the nightmare that had become a cruel reality. His mind raced his pounding heart.

BANG!

Quickly, Joel stood up to face the source of the noise; his heart almost pumped right out of his hammering chest. In front of him a mountain of tangled steel stood angrily and, all around him, the upside down train was eradicated. Cars were piled up frighteningly, encircling him. Just another few feet and he would've been killed; crushed to death. But that banging noise haunted him, and he was reminded of it as it sounded again.

SLAM!

Backing up, Joel felt like his courage had been torn away from him. The noise was almost a laboured groan.

Mechanical or Animal?

It was a demonic screech. Another bang rippled through the air, and again, and again. Joel's heart was in his throat and there was no clearer taste in his mouth than the metallic, repulsive flavour of blood. It had never bothered him before, but now that blood was like tasting his own fear on his lips. 

BANG!

The piece of destroyed metal was thrown into the air and it slashed the ground. As he covered his head, Joel flung himself to the floor, like it was his only protection. The animalistic and delusional screech of whatever it was rang out again, louder this time. Joel got back up to look at the metal that had stabbed the ground, wounding it. Then, he spun back around and something hideous was silhouetted on top of the overturned train. It was huge and menacing and, if Joel wasn't mistaken, it didn't belong here, not on Earth. The creature edged towards him, squealing softly. Tripping up on a piece of metal, Joel's arm was slashed open on a stray shard of broken glass. Closing his eyes, he prepared for the inevitable pain that was surely going to come. His eyes were tight shut. But then...

"JOEL!"

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