Swept Away

Callie has planned the quintessential vacation to Hawaii. White sand beaches, clear blue waters, and she even gets to surf a tube wave --- her very first! The vacation is perfect, what could go wrong?

I know the blurb is kind of cheesy, but the movella is more interesting.

Hey guys, this is my first Movella, so don't hate. Leave comments please! ILYGSM!

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2. Transported

      Suddenly, the water turned ice-cold around me. The clear water turned murky and I start to panic. I can't breathe, and I can taste the seasoned halibut I had earlier coming up, along with the pineapple passion fruit  sherbet I had for dessert.  My perfect vacation was turning from heaven to hell in a matter of seconds. I tumble around randomly, and I am pretty sure fish aren't in the sky. One second I am tangled in seaweed, the next I am catapulted throughout the air. Something hits my head, and I see red. Red is my whole world.

The red is tinged with black. 

 

My vision is blurring.  

 

I can't see. 

 

I feel myself slipping away. 

 

Trying to hold on. 

 

Can't stay awake. 

 

I need........

 

My world fades to black.

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