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3. "The Island of Ecital" Review

 

Name: Sydney

Book: The Island of Ecital

Genre: Adventure

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I agree with your form, the idea is very original, and I would really want it to be published, too. 

 

Basically, in @Fuzzy89's movella, disaster struck, a group of kids are trying to find somewhere better to live, and they found a island (which I'm guessing is "The Island of Ecital?")

Out of 10 stars, I would probably give it 9. 

 

Here's why: I couldn't really see any errors on it, and I really liked your plot and descriptions. Each character was very creative, the setting was descriptive, I liked the Harry Potter reference, and overall, it was a great movella. I can't wait for the next update!

 

At the end of Chapter 3, there were a couple errors though.

By "anchent," did you mean "ancient"? In the second to last and last sentence, did you mean to say, "causing" instead of "causeing" , and "needed" instead of "neaded"? 

 

Other than that, I really liked the movella, and I look forward to seeing more of your work, Fuzzy89!

 

 

-TheCrazyMustachio

 

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