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4. "Define Depression" and "Jupiter" Reviews

 

Book(s): "Define Depression" and "Jupiter"

Name: Delilah Arende 

Authors: The Darkness Inside, Radiance Radio, Ahlaam Nightshade, and maverick.

Genre(s): Realism (For "Define Depression"), and Fanfiction (For "Jupiter")

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For "Define Depression," I was extremely impressed at your work. You hooked me, you had detail, you had almost no errors at all, and it was also heartbreaking how the first story was based of a real one. 

So if I were to give it a rating out of 10 stars, I would give it:

10.00099999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 stars.

Yup, that's how epic it was. Congrats to you four authors, I see real potential in you guys, good job, good job, waffles for everyone! :D

At the first paragraph in Chapter 3, though, in the last sentence, it said, "Each dress had it's our fake crystal tiara and a set of colored matching wings." Did you mean to put "own"? And the type of its/it's you're using means either 'it has' or 'it is', so did you mean "its"? Correct me if I'm wrong, I was never good at grammar. XD

 

Other than that, there wasn't really any other errors, so that's all I have to say about this awesome movella!

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For the movella, "Jupiter," it was really well written, interesting, original, and just plain amazing. 

There wasn't any errors that I saw, so that adds to the epicness. 

I would give it a 10 out of 10, and I'm wondering when you'll update "Jupiter." Will it be soon? Just wondering. ^-^

 

-TheCrazyMustachio

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