Sasuke's return to the hidden leaf

When Sasuke returns to the hidden leaf, to see Sakura, lots of things happen, for example, they confess their feelings for each other, as well as get into a tickle fight. This story has some adult content with sex talking. If you don't like adult content, please don't read this. I haven't updated the adult content yet. This is my very first fanfiction so please tell me what I can do to make it better, and please be nice.


4. revenge of my inner self

While Sakura and Sasuke were asleep, their inner selves were talking to each other from far away. (Yes, their inner selves could talk to each other from far away. In my story).

"What do you think we should do?" Inner Sakura asked. "I don't know," Inner Sasuke said,"I've never thought of revenge. Unless it was when Sasuke was younger. The day Itachi destroyed his clan. Other than that, no I haven't." "I've already made a list of revenge ideas." Inner Sakura said, pulling out her list.

"Oh great." Inner Sasuke sarcastically, while rolling his eyes. "What's that supposed to mean?" Inner Sakura asked. "Oh nothing." Inner Sasuke said.

"Well, first on the list, I have... Make Sakura tickle torture Sasuke, until he passes out." "Well that will just make him cuss out Sakura." "True. I guess that won't solve anything, but we can try it, can't we?" "I guess, but how?" Inner sakura thought for a second.

"How about I take over Sakura's body, and make her tickle Sasuke." "Great idea! Let's try it." Inner Sasuke said.

The next day... Sakura and Sasuke were hanging out in Sakura's bedroom. Inner Sasuke and Inner Sakura were waiting for the perfect time to do their plan. At last, Inner Sasuke gave Inner Sakura the signal.

"Here goes nothing." She said. Inner Sakura then took over Sakura's body completely, and made it so that Sakura wouldn't be able to re-take over her own body.

Inner Sakura pushed Sasuke onto Sakura's bed so hard that his chest was bleeding. There was a cut on his chest, from Sakura's nails. She then pounced on top of him.

"Sakura!" Sasuke shouted. "What the hell are you doing, get the hell off me! You're gonna kill me if you don't get off me!" "Good! Maybe then you'll know how your inner and I feel!" Sasuke started to know who really was in Sakura's body, when she ran her nail around his neck, which made Sasuke laugh. Not evil laugh, regular laugh!

"HehehehehehehehestohohohohohopSakurahahahahahahahahahaplehehehehehehease!" "I'm getting bored. I'm gonna try another spot." Sakura then started tickling Sasuke's stomach, making him go into hysterics, considering the fact that his stomach was his extremely ticklish spot.

"SAKURAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAPLEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEASEHAHAHAHAHASTOHOHOHOPIHITHAHAHAHA!" Sakura then took a deep breath and blew a long raspberry into his sensitive stomach.


"She shoots she scores!" Inner Sakura said. She then let Sakura re-take control of her body.

"Sasuke?! Sasuke! Are you ok?!" There was no answer. "I think he's dead"

Reviews please. Comment what you think of this story so far. Anything I can do to fix this? First fanfiction.

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