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It's about a family in the future when the royal family come to visit a factory where they families children work the princess drops her 28 carat diamond ring in a pile of wool, Tris and her older brother Lux must come to grips of what they have found and they conceal the precious jewellery and when people go on the run for them every second they don't give it ring back their punishment will go beyond question… Also This is like my approach of Tris in Divergent and that she joined Dauntless and lives like a dauntless would


2. Chapter two

As we walk down a hill we see the factory my dad kisses me and pats Lux on the back as the King, Queen and their daughter Marcella she is the same age as me but she definitely hasn't got the same intelligence level as me she is very dim and her parents know it, as we walk up to the factory i am greeted by Gwen and Zaire they are sisters that live opposite us Zaire is the same age as me but Gwen is 12, and soon after Lux's friends come and join us too it's Gwen and Zaire's older and younger brothers Emielo and Teilo, Teilo is the older brother he is 15 the same as Lux the boys soon go away and we are lest they will probably be turning up late and being yelled at by Trig, he is the boss and he is scary as i was when i found a bewhiskered rat i found in the garden once when i was 6 i had just started working and i cried on the first day because i trapped my ankle in these gargantuan panels that go up and down and they won't stop so i had to wait 10 minutes for it to rise up again.

That is my worst memory of that ghastly factory. Most of our countries population don't see children starting work at 6 bad at all in the olden day children started working when they were at least 16 years old, why don't they increase it from 6 to 16, this generation is messed up, people are brainwashed into the weirdest of rules every person must follow no exceptions. 

When we get to the grand oak door there is horrible dirt streaks on the concrete walls there is no cheer or joy in these places my friend Sera was killed by these massive panels that move very quickly so you always have to be looking but Sera wasn't that lucky she was 7 how could this of happened? 

We have to a clean as we can be today because the royals are coming and they must be impressed or they will have to choice to sack all of us and Trig wouldn't be happy and he knows where we all live so he would probably kill us all so i actually scrubbed the dirt out of my trousers last night and Lux too. Trig ordered us to be at the factory at 5:30 am so we would clean the place up before the snobs came in to snoop around our workplace for an hour and then go home and have beautiful food and be treated more equally than anyone else in this country...

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