Sparrow's Reviews

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4. Wrong Number by wreckedmind

WARNING: This movella should be rated Y or R because it contains serious cursing and references to adult-y things. Please do not be fooled by its rating of G.

In general, this is well-put-together and shows the sour side of humanity. I like the way the plot turns, and I planned to stop reading at chapter five, but ended up at chapter 12. There's something wrong with chapter ten; it starts over where the end should be.

As of the little things, there's not much to put. There should always be some sort of punctuation after a direct quote (someone speaking), something that seems to be missing from a lot of your dialogue.

All in all, this movella has a good storyline and plot, and the few mistakes are easily looked over. The only other thing I suggest is to please change the rating to Y; it doesn't fall under the category of G.

Spelling/Grammar: 8

Plot: 10

Creativity: 10

Overall: 9 1/3

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