Sparrow's Reviews

Hello! This, like many others, is a review movella. The first chapter will have more details, so, don't be shy, read on!


7. Fated by RockkaRolla Maverick ☆

NOTE: This movella is rated Y, but just for one curse word.

Ok, first off, I really enjoyed this one. Don't let the tag of "vampire" discourage you, it's rarely talked about. The plot is amazing and is just the right pace for your writing.

One thing I might say, though, is to rename a couple of your characters (namely, Severus and Rachel, the Oracle), as people already have images of those characters in their heads (as I did) and it gets a little distracting. Also, is it weird that I imagined Delaroth as Benedict Cumberbatch? Maybe I've been watching too much Sherlock recently...

Overall, this movella was wonderfully unique and definitely not one to pass up. Good job with it!

Spelling/Grammar: 10

Plot: 10

Creativity: 10

Overall 10 (that's really good!)

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