Some poems I am writing for a school project. Please give me feed back on what I could do better.


1. free verse

"Earth is Alive"


Spring is green,

Bright and airy,

Summer is like a butterfly,

Vivid and soaring.

Winter is a blizzard,

Blustery and cold.

Autumn is like a painter’s pallet,

Colorful and bright.

Water runs through mountains grasp.

Sun shining like a diamond.

Ice melting into lakes of gold.

Birds singing a song as sweet as chocolate.

Fish swimming up streams,

Fighting their way to the trophy of the top.

Deer run faster than a bullet

Wind telling stories to the trees.

Earth quakes,

Shakes and destroy

Everlasting beauty, agony, and grace.

Earth is alive.

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