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6. 'Hemmings' by @TheUnicorn_x

'Hemmings' by @TheUnicorn_x

Writing Style

I like this book. There's loads of interesting events happening. Even though there's a couple of POV switches, it's good in a way if you want to give the reader thoughts and intentions of a character like you did with Luke.

What i like about it?

I love the story idea. I love the plot idea because it is different to others. There's interesting characters as well and you can tell there's going to be a turn of events.

Spelling/Grammar

I didn't notice any spelling mistakes which is great. There is some different vocabulary used as well.

Improvements

I think you should add a bit detail and make you chapters longer. But i love your story overall.

Rate

I'm going to rate it 7.5 The plot idea is really interesting. Please carry on writing and update soon..

Be sure to check out 'Hemmings' by @TheUnicorn_x

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