4. 'Defenders of Meteo' by @Rihae Nufei
'Defenders of Meteo' by @Rihae Nufei
Your writing style is good. It is in great detail. There's information and the basic storyline is good.
What i like about it?
I like the amount of detail put in to each and every event happening. It gives a good image when you understand it.
I couldn't really see any spelling mistakes. However, the use of words when describing is good.
This book generally isn't for me. I am better at reading and reviewing 1D fanfictions. This is like a fantasy type of a traditional story. I'd say you should explain yourself a bit as i got a bit confused. I had to read a part again to understand. But overall i liked the story line👍
I'm going to rate it 7.1 You could tell you tried hard and the story line is good.
Be sure to check out 'Defenders of Meteo' by @Rihae Nufei !!