The X-Factor

One Direction is formed into a band on the X-Factor and is going to be going threw and going to try and win X-Factor, but then this band Called Peace comes and The boys are wanting to get to know them. The gurls would like to the know the boys too but one problem three of them dont want to know them cause they know they will end up getting hurt, they dont want to risk it and also they want to practice and focus on what they need to do before they worry about the boys, But the boys wont give up. Read To Find Out ;) Hope you all Like


6. X-Factor: Day 1

*Shiloh's POV*

I woke up with Children of the Corn on its main menu. I looked to the side and saw Louis sleeping. He was so cute even when he sleeps.

(Few days later)

Well we got bootcamp done with for now. I just woke up and Im still tired! Today is going to be a bad day if im still tired right now.

"Shiloh you need to get up sweetie." I heard my mum say from the other side of the door.

I slowly got out of bed with out waking up Louis and walked all the way to the door. Once I reached there I saw Louis getting up. I opened up the door and saw my mum.

"Well, good morning Sunshine."

"Morning." I said rubbing my eye.

"I just wanted to tell you that you and Louis have until 6:00. Cause we need to get to the X-Factor by 6:30 cause show starts at 7."

"Okay. Mum."

"Okay. Bye Sweetie."

"Bye." I said yawning and shutting the door.

"Who was it?" Louis said as I turned around.

"My mum was just saying that we need to be ready by 6:00. Cause tonight is the first day of the X-Factor."

"Oh okay."





"Im going to take a shower wbu?"

"Yah, I am too."

"You can go first."

"No you go ahead. "

"You sure?"

"Yeah, its fine go ahead."

"Okay thanks."

I went over to my bag and laid out my outfit for the day. I grabbed my robe and other things yes I always put on my bra and underwear then my robe and then get my cloths. I just hate them getting wet in the bathroom some how. So yh.

I went into the bathroom and started the shower. I hung my robe up, took off my cloths and jumped into the shower. The warm water burnt my skin but it felt good.

*After Shower*

After my shower. I brushed my hair and put in a side braid. I put on my robe that I love.

I walked out and Louis was watching movies on my laptop. He looked up and smiled.

"Oh shut up. I didnt want to get my cloths wet so this is what I do."

"Ah I see now."

I walked over to the bed and grabbed my outfit and walked back into the bathroom. I threw on my things and hung my robe behind the door. I walked back to the room and Louis got up and walked pasted me into the bathroom. 

About 15 minutes later Louis comes back out and looks pretty nice. I cant wait till tonight to put on my dress. All of us girls are wearing a dress. Simon wanted us to wear a dress and us girls all brought a dress just in case. I only brought one cause I only have one and all of the other girls brought like 5 but Mackenzie brought 2 cause that is all she has too. 

Louis came over to me and laid down again.

"You ready for tonight?" I asked him.

"Yes, but im really tired. You?"

"Im scared"

"Why?" He said sitting up.

"Cause im afraid we are going to lose."

"No you wont. You guys are good."

"Thanks. Do you want to go to Starbucks?"

"No problem and that would be lovely."

I grabbed my wallet:

and we headed out the door. We went down the elevator and a few people came running up to Louis and asking him for a picture. He agreed and took a few pictures with them. 

After Louis took pictures we walked to Starbucks, which was right across the street. I ordered a Carmel Apple Spice and Blueberry Scone. Louis got a Grande Cuppachino. ( I dont know if I spelt that right :/ ) We sat down at a table and I ate my Blue Berry Scone and Drank some on my drink.

"If you dont mind me asking." Louis said.


"Where is your brothers and dad?"

"Oh They Um....."

"You don't have to tell me if you don't want to you know."

"I know but I am going to tell you cause that is what friends do."

"Okay, but you dont have to tell me everything." He said and I nodded my head.

"Okay. When I got to high school my brother Mack started to be mean and rude to me. Then my dad was drinking a lot and he was being rude too. By my Junior year all of my friends left me cause I was getting hurt a lot. I was bullied none stop. Then everyday that I went home I was beat  a lot but my dad and brother. My mum decided that I should live on my own. She bought me a new home away from them, I had to go to a new school and stuff. That is where I meant my band mates. I always want to visit my mum and older brother but I cant without getting beat."

Louis sat there shock. He looked at me and shook his head. He got up and came over to me and hugged me. I hugged him back and we did not let go for a good 5 minutes. 

After we ate we grabbed our drinks and walked back to the hotel. We got into the elevator and again we were alone.

"So, do you um, have any bruises?"

"Yah, and some cuts on me."

"Shiloh, im really......"

"No, Louis you dont have to be sorry. You didnt do this to me. They have beaten Mackenzie before and I told them that I rather take all of the beatings then letting anyone have them. I guess I deserve it."

"Shiloh, you dont deserve it. It should of not ever happen to you."

The elevator door opened and my mum and Johanna were standing there.

"There you guys are." My mum said.

"Uh, yah why?" 

"Oh we brought you two some lunch and we could not find you." Johanna said.

"Oh sorry we forgot to tell you that we went over to Starbucks."

"Oh that is fine. You guys go."


"Thanks Mum." Louis said.

We walked over to our door 582 and unlocked it and went inside. We went to our own bed jumped on it and started eating our MicDonalds.

"So what you wearing tonight?" Louis asked me.

"Its a surprise. We left it at the X-Factor so we can surprise you." I said with a smile and a wink to him. 

He smiled back and said' okay can't wait to see you' and winked at me. I smiled and felt my cheeks warm up. Do I really feel this way for Louis. I mean when I figure out a guy likes me I tell him that he could find someone better then me cause im not special or anything at all.

I looked at Louis who looked at me and smiled. I laid down still looking at him and smiled back.



"Go ahead take a nap."

"Okay but I cant with out and Tommo hug." I said

He smiled and jumped out of his bed and jumped on me and into my bed. He hugged me and smiled at me.

"Better?" He asked.


He hugged me again and kissed me on the check.



I closed my eyes and drifted off to sleep.

*6 hours later*

I woke up an hour earlier and got my hair brushed and straightened. I have natural straight hair. I walked out to wear Louis was and he was dressed and ready for the very first day. Our mums and   my band all went to the X-Factor. My band went into the dressing room and Louis's name was called. we both had turned and saw four boys standing there waving. 

"I got to go. I'' see yah later love."

"Okay Tommo." I said.

He hugged me and kissed me on the check.

"Love you."

"Love you too."

I said as he walked off. I walked over to our dressing room that said 'PEACE' I walked in and the girls were getting on make-up. I hate make-up but I had to have some on just to make my face stand out and not different on stage.

After make-up was over with they left and we all changed into our dresses.

This was mine:

Mackenzie's Dress:

Nicole's Dress:

Allie's Dress:

Sean's Dress:

Ashton's Dress:

We all looked great. We went back stage and we would be on after the next group.. I turned away and then I saw Louis in the corner. I turned away cause I did not want him to see me yet.

"LOUIS!!!!!" Mackenzie yelled.

I turned my head and saw Louis coming our way with his band. Great my luck. I went over and talked to the man and asked him when those boys were playing. He said they are performing the group that will be after us. I asked him what they were called and he said they were called' One Direction' I thanked him and walked back to the group.

Louis looked at me and was shocked and then he smiled. He went around everyone and came over to me and hugged me.

"You look beautiful tonight." He whispered in my ear.

"Well, thank you. You look great your-self."


We looked at everyone and they were giving us looks.

"What?" I asked.

"Nothing." Ashton said and everyone turned around.


"Yah, I know right."

"Peace you are up next." The man said.

"Good luck ." The other boys said.

My band walked to the curtain Louis came up and hugged me again.

"Good luck to you." he said and whispered to me. 

Then walked back to his group who winked and giggled at me. I grabbed my microphone and the boys came up behind me can it frightened me cause I didnt know they were that close. The other person left the stage and we were on. The lights were dark until we start. Then the music started and the lights slowly came on.


I hopped off the plane at L.A.X.
With a dream and my cardigan
Welcome to the land of fame excess (whoa),
Am I gonna fit in?

Jumped in the cab,
Here I am for the first time
Look to my right and I see the Hollywood sign
This is all so crazy
Everybody seems so famous

My tummy's turnin' and I'm feelin' kinda home sick
Too much pressure and I'm nervous,
That's when the taxi man turned on the radio
And a Jay-Z song was on
And a Jay-Z song was on
And a Jay-Z song was on

[Chorus:] (Everyone)
So I put my hands up
They're playing my song,
The butterflies fly away
I'm noddin' my head like yeah
Movin' my hips like yeah
I got my hands up,
They're playin' my song
I know I'm gonna be OK
Yeah, it's a party in the USA
Yeah, it's a party in the USA

Get to the club in my taxi cab
Everybody's looking at me now
Like, "Who's that chick that's rockin' kicks?
She gotta be from out of town."

So hard with my girls not around me
It's definitely not a Nashville party
'Cause all I see are stilettos
I guess I never got the memo

My tummy's turnin' and I'm feelin' kinda home sick
Too much pressure and I'm nervous
That's when the DJ dropped my favorite tune
And a Britney song was on
And a Britney song was on
And a Britney song was on


Feel like hoppin' on a flight (on a flight)
Back to my hometown tonight (town tonight)
Something stops me every time (every time)
The DJ plays my song and I feel alright

[Chorus 2x]


Then we ended it and everyone was clapping, screaming and excited.

The judges said somethings and Simon said he was so glad to have us on his team. We thanked them and then walked off stage. I stopped and waited for Louis's group. Finally it was his groups turn. The lights were off and I could see them go to there stop next to a microphone. Then the lights came on as one of them sang:

I used to rule the world 
Seas would rise when I gave the word 
Now in the morning I sleep alone 
Sweep the streets I used to own 

I used to roll the dice 
Feel the fear in my enemy's eyes 
Listen as the crowd would sing: 
"Now the old king is dead! Long live the king!" 

One minute I held the key 
Next the walls were closed on me 
And I discovered that my castles stand 
Upon pillars of salt and pillars of sand 

I hear Jerusalem bells a ringing 
Roman Cavalry choirs are singing 
Be my mirror my sword and shield 
My missionaries in a foreign field 
For some reason I can't explain 
Once you go there was never, never an honest word 
That was when I ruled the world 

I hear Jerusalem bells a ringing 
Roman Cavalry choirs are singing 
Be my mirror my sword and shield 
My missionaries in a foreign field 
For some reason I can't explain 
I know Saint Peter won't call my name 

Never an honest word 
and that was when I ruled the world


They finished and the crowd went crazy. They came out over to were I was standing.

"Nice job boys." I said

"well, Thank you." the brown hair boy said.

"Its nothing oh and i'm Shiloh."


"Its nice to meet you Niall."

"You too Shiloh."

I look at Louis and smiled at him.

"You did an amazing job." I said to him.

"Thank You." Louis said.

I turned around and decided to head off to my dressing room. I got to my dressing room and the boys followed me all the way to the room.

"Everything okay here?"

"Yah, Why?" Zayn asked.

"Just wondering cause you guys followed me all the way to my dressing room."

"You mean our?" Niall asked.


I looked at the sign and One Direction's name was on it too. Great. We all walked in and the girls were on there phone, brushing there hair or taking off make-up.

I walked in with the boys behind me. The boys all sat down on an open couch. Aston came out of the dressing room with her dress in her hands. She hung it up on the rack. I went over and grabbed my outfit, I use to have on. Then I went over and into the dressing room.I took off my dress and hung it up. I had looked into the mirror and saw how skinny I was, all of the bruises on my stomach and the cuts on my legs and arms. I turned around and saw the huge bruise on my back and on the back of my neck that my dad gave me by hitting me with a bat.

I started to tear up and become upset. I shook my head and put on my shirt, jeans, and jacket to cover up my arms. I know I know for the show, but see my make-up designers covered them all up so no-one could see them but as I started to sweat it came off. Im just glad no-one could see them. The only person who knows and seen my marks is Mackenzie.All of the gurls know about what they do but they don't think it is that bad. Louis knows too but not about the scars.

I walked out of the dressing room with tears in my eyes.No one noticed I think.I hung up my dress. Once I turned around Louis shot straight up. I ran out of the dressing room crying.

"Shiloh!" Louis yelled to me.

I just ignored him and kept running. Then I ran into someone. 

"Oh well, hi there sweetie."

I looked up and saw Demi Lovato there. 

"Hi." I said in a very low tone.

"Come here sweetie." she said opening up her arms. 

I hugged her and heard two people running.

"There she is." someone said.

"Who?" Demi asked still hugging me.

"Shiloh, we could not find out where she had gone too." Louis said.

I could tell it was him cause I know what he sounds like. 

Demi and I stopped hugging and I saw Simon, Demi, and Louis looking at me.

"Shiloh, whats wrong?" Simon asked.


"Shiloh you can tell us." Demi said.

"Louis knows shy."

"Oh Shiloh it will never happen again as long as I am here." Louis said.

"Louis, yes it will. They will never stop also Demi and Simon since you dont know my dad and brother beat me."

"I'm so sorry Shiloh." Demi said hugging me again.

Simon also gave me a hug. I walked away so I could go outside. I looked around to make sure no-one was around. I took off my sweatshirt and I was fixing my tanktop. Then I was pushed to the ground. I hit the ground pretty hard. I looked over my shoulder and I got punched right in the eye. Then they kept kicking my side and punching my back. 

After about 5 minutes they stopped and left. I laid there on the grounf in pain.

"SHILOH!" someone yelled.

The next thing I knew was Mackenzie was right in front of me. I tried to get up but my left side hurt. I saw Louis not to far away. I got up with help from Mackenzie. I tried to hop away but I could not. 

Louis caught up to us.

"Shi, what happened?"

"I'm fine Louis. I'm use to it.

"Mackenzie I got it." Louis said and Mackenzie walked back to the room.

Louis came over to me and picked me up bridal style.

"Owch." I said.

"Im sorry love didn't mean to hurt you."

"It's fine. My side just hurts"

"Oh I see. What happened?"

"I don't know. I just saw two people and then they beat me up."

"Where were you hit at?"

"My left side and my back."

"Is it okay if I see how bad they are?"

"Uh, sure. "

Louis walked into a private room and sat me down. I took a beep breath and lifted up my shirt only on the part where they hit me.

"Shi, its all red and it looks painful."

"Yah, I know. You get us to the pain I guess." 

"Let me see your back."

"No." I said moving away.

"Why not?"

"Um..... Because."

"Shiloh, i'm not going to make fun of you."

"I know."


"You can't tell anyone. Promise."


I lifted up the back of my shirt revealing the huge bruise which is now huge. I pulled my shirt back down and turned to Louis. He looked sad. I pulled him in for a hug. He put his hands lightly on my lower back. 

After we pulled away he asked me:

"So..... um what happened with you arms?"

"Nothing just fell out of a tree."

"Shiloh, no you didn't. I have fallen out of a tree and it only leaves a scratch and bruise. Not all of these." he said pointing to my arms.

"Okay fine. They are from my dad and brother."

"All of these on your arms?"

"Yes, they are all over my arms, legs, stomach, back and the back of my neck. That is why I wear sweatpants,sweatshirts, jeans and ect."

"Can I have your phone?"


"Call your dad."

"Louis please no. I dont want him to know where I am. He thinks I ran away but I just lived on my own for 3 years and my mother helped pay for the house and food."

"Oh im sorry shiloh. Its just I dont want thins happening to you."

"Louis, ill be fine."

"If he ever finds you call me or Harry okay?"

"Oaky. Ill call you first and I alos dont have Harry's number."

"Aww and oh yh here."

Louis gave me his number and then called him.

"Hello?" a british accent said.

"Harry!" Louis said.


"Are you guys still at the room?"


"Is it oaky if he knows?" Louis asked me.

"He just heard you."

"no he is on mute."

"Okay and sure cause if you dont answer he might."

"Thanks love." Louis asked and kissed my forehead.

He started talking to Harry again and telling him everything. I just stood there and was thinking about what Harry is going to say.

"Shiloh?" someone said.

I looked and saw Louis trying to get my attention. 

"Oh im sorry."

"Its fine."

"So what did Harry say?"

"He understands and is really sorry about what happoened. He started crying and is coming down here right now." 

"What. Aww now I feel bad for making him cry now."

"It's alright. Don't worry about it."

"No..... I am cause I feel bad for making him cry."

Then the door started to open. I hid behind Louis. the door opened up and in came Harry. I looked around Louis and Harry looked right at me. He ran over to me, looked at me, then he grabbed my shoulder and I wrapped my arms around his waist.

"It should of never happened to you." He whispered in my ear.

I hugged him tighter and he did the same.

We stopped and Harry looked me in the eyes. He had a really sad face on.

"Harry, im sorry I made you cry."

"Its fine. I know we dont know each other for long but I like you."

"Wait  what?"

"not that kind of way. As a sister way. I know someone who likes you and anyways I already know who I like."


"You wont tell right?"

"No, promise."

"Okay. I like Mackenzie."

"Aww thats cute."

"Thanks. I like her a lot."

"Aww. Hey who likes me."

"Sorry I am not allowed to say."

"Aww well thanks Harry."



"Yes love?"

"Can we go back to the hotel?"


"Thanks. You can come too Harry."

"Maybe another time, but thanks for the offer."

"No Problem."

Harry went back with the others while Louis and I went back to the hotel. When we got outside I thought I saw someone that looked familiar. I shook it off and got into the car.

"So have you heard?" Louis asked me.

"No what?"

"Simon is making everyone stay in an house and when it is the final 5 all of them stay together."

"Oh do we have to share?"

"Yes, with one other member or group."

"Oh great."

"What happens if I dont know like them."

"I dont know yet."

"Oh okay. So who are you guys moving into with?"


"Why are you saying bye?"

"No the band: Peace." Louis said laughing.



"Omg. No way. Now I am way excited."

"Me too."

I smiled at him and then I looked at my phone and saw Harry had called. I called him back to see what he needed.


"Harry. Hey what did you need."

"Dont go to your hotel."


"Is there a car behind you?"

I turned around and a red truck was following us.

"Yah, why?"

"Get away from them. We are on our way."



My mum said in the background.

"Louis. Dont go to the hotel. Ill explain later."

My dad found me, but how? 

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