The X-Factor

One Direction is formed into a band on the X-Factor and is going to be going threw and going to try and win X-Factor, but then this band Called Peace comes and The boys are wanting to get to know them. The gurls would like to the know the boys too but one problem three of them dont want to know them cause they know they will end up getting hurt, they dont want to risk it and also they want to practice and focus on what they need to do before they worry about the boys, But the boys wont give up. Read To Find Out ;) Hope you all Like


2. First Day

*Shiloh's POV*

We finally made it to the X-Factor. The line was starting to get long. My group and mum went and stood in line while I went and checked us in.

"Hello Miss," a nice guy said.


"And who must you be?"

"Oh I am Shiloh Anderson. I am in a group called Peace?"

"Oh yes you are right here Mrs. Anderson."


"Where is your group?"

"They are in line. I came to check us in."

"Oh well thats nice of you to do that. Is everyone here?" He asked lookin around me.

"Yes, There is Sean Thompson." I pointed out and he checked her off.

"Ashton James and Nicole Curtis."

"And then there is Mackenzie Payne and Allie Chance."

"Okay, Thank you. I have all of you guys marked off as here."

"Okay Thank you." I started to walk away.

"Anderson, you forgot your guys number." He said holding 6 pieces of paper in his hand.

"Oh Yah, Thank you."

"No Problem."

I walked back to everyone and saw that our number was 155205.

"We in?" Nicole asked.

"Yup and here are our numbers."

I handed all of the girls there numbers and we all placed them on our outfits.

"Shi dont look behind you but a really cute guy is behind you." Ashton whispered to me.

"I don't believe you."


I pulled my bag off and turned around trying to get my phone out of the bag and looking a little bit. He was actually really cute. I got a glance of his number and saw he was right before us. He has number: 155204.

"Ashton your right and here is the other thing he is right before us. Omg."

"Shi its okay."

"Sorry, he is just so cute."

"I need 155204 and 155205 to come with me." Someone yelled for us and the boy.

All 9 of us went in threw the doors we could hear someone singing and the crowd clapping once they were done. 




Was what I heard. Lucky them. They made it threw even thought I cant see who it is, im proud of them.

Then number 155203 went on.

"Hey guys I have a bad feeling that I am going to mess up and ruin it for all of us." I said.

"Shiloh dont say that. You will do fine." Sean said.

"Hey don't worry about it."

I turned around and saw the boy I thought was cute there.

"You will do just fine. Just act like you are practicing in front of your family or parents. Dont think about that there is a crowd or Judges. How I try not to make myself nervous is get into the music and just do what you love to do." The young man said.

"Thank You. That helps me a whole lot now. Thank you so much."

"Your welcome and whats your name?"

"Shiloh Anderson. You?"

"Louis Tomlinson and love the name."


"Who are they?" 

"Oh this is my band, Ashton, Allie, Mackenzie, Nicole, and Sean."

"Well, it's nice to met you all."

"You too." They said.

"Whats your's bands name?" Louis asked.

"Peace." Allie said.

"Nice. Hey I got to go perform now. I am going to be watching you though." Louis said and pointed at me as he walked to the stage entrance

"I'll watch you too." I yelled back to him.

He turned his head and smiled at me. I walked over to where he was and he walked on.

After they asked him questions he started to sing. He was singing Hey There Delilah. I liked that song. He was a really good singer. He better make it threw.



'Um..... Yes.' Simon said.

"Oh my god. Thank You so much."

He came off stage and hugged him mother.

"Louis did you a great job." I told him.

"Thanks Shiloh. "

"He came over to me and gave me a hug.

'155205 its your turn.' The man said.

"Oh no." I said while still hugging Louis.

"You will do fine. I have faith in you."


My band walked on and people were screaming and cheer for us.

"Welcome. Who is this lovely girl band?" Simon asked.

Us girls looked at each other and then everyone looked at me. I nodded.

"We are Peace. That is Nicole, Mackenzie, Sean, Allie, Ashton, and I am Shiloh."

"I love theses girls already. Especially there outfits. So cute." Demi said.

"Where are you guys from?"

"Mackenzie, Ashton, Nicole and I are all from the USA." Sean said.

"I am from Ireland and of course I'm Irish." Allie said and a lot of people cheered.

"And I am from King's Lynn. Right here in England and I'm British of course." I said and more people cheered. 

We all smiled and laugh.

"Okay. What song you going to be singing for us?" Louis asked.

"Mine: By Taylor Swift." Nicole said.

"Okay. Have Fun and Good Luck." Simon said.

Uh, oh, oh
Uh, oh, oh

You were in college working part time waiting tables
Left a small town, never looked back
I was a flight risk with a fear of fallin’
Wondering why we bother with love if it never lasts

I say "Can you believe it?
As we’re lying on the couch?"
The moment I can see it.
Yes, yes, I can see it now.

Do you remember, we were sitting there by the water?
You put your arm around me for the first time.
You made a rebel of a careless man’s careful daughter.
You are the best thing that’s ever been mine.

Flash forward and we’re taking on the world together,
And there’s a drawer of my things at your place.
You learn my secrets and you figure out why I’m guarded,
You say we’ll never make my parents’ mistakes.

But we got bills to pay,
We got nothing figured out,
When it was hard to take,
Yes, yes, this is what I thought about.

Do you remember, we were sitting there by the water?
You put your arm around me for the first time
You made a rebel of a careless man’s careful daughter
You are the best thing that’s ever been mine.

Do you remember all the city lights on the water?
You saw me start to believe for the first time
You made a rebel of a careless man’s careful daughter
You are the best thing that’s ever been mine.

Oh, oh, oh, oh

And I remember that fight
Two-thirty AM
As everything was slipping right out of our hands
I ran out crying and you followed me out into the street
Braced myself for the "Goodbye."
‘Cause that’s all I’ve ever known
Then you took me by surprise
You said, "I’ll never leave you alone."

You said, "I remember how we felt sitting by the water.
And every time I look at you, it’s like the first time.
I fell in love with a careless man’s careful daughter.
She is the best thing that’s ever been mine."

Hold on, make it last
Hold on, never turn back

You made a rebel of a careless man’s careful daughter
You are the best thing that’s ever been mine.

(Hold on) do you believe it?
(Hold on) we're gonna make it now.
(Hold on) and I can see it,
(Yes, yes) I can see it now (see it now, see it now...)


The crowd got really loud at the end. We all looked at each other and did a group hug. We looked at the Judges and Demi was standing up clapping. Then she sat down.

"That's was amazing." Demi said.

"Thank you." Ashton said."

"You girls are really good. I can tell you have gone to lessons. I would say that some of you need to work on your breath on the right spots. I know you are nervous but make sure your breathing is correct." Louis said.

"I agree with Louis. Your Breathing you are going to need to work on. Also I notice that when you guys sing together there is just this beautiful sound coming from each of you. Also who are my high note girls?" Simon asked.

Ashton, Sean and I all raised our hands.

"Okay for you three girls. When you go to hit the high notes dont think, 'oh I need to hit the high notes' no dont think that just think down when you girls hit the high notes."

"Okay." We all said.

"Now lets vote. Louis?" Demi said.

"Yes, you girls are amazing."

"Thank you." Allie said.

"Demi?" Simon said.

"Yes, I hope you guys make it to the top three. I love you girls."

"Thank you so much." Mackenzie said.

"Simon?" Demi asked.

"If you can promise to work on your breathing and High notes?"

"Yes we can." Ashton said.

"I say a Big Yes."

The crowd was screaming and happy and I was shock until my group hugged me and then we walked off stage and I hugged my mum and Louis. 

"I told you, you can do it." Louis told me.

"Thanks for having faith in my Louis. Thank you."

"Its no problem. Im just glad that I will be able to know you better and more since we both are going threw."

"Yah, but what about you? Solo artist it is way different for you guys. You guys are going to be picked to see who goes threw. I really hope you do, cause if you dont make it , it would be different and ill miss you."

"Aww, Shiloh."

"I dont care if I just met you. I actually say anything thats on my mind."

"Its fine. Ill miss you too if I go." Louis said and hugged me and then we walked away all of us all happy. Cant wait to see if he makes it threw. I hope he does.  


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