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9. X Factor Changed My Life

X Factor Changed My Life is about a girl who auditions for the X factor the same season as 1Direction, and is put into a girl group, just as they are a boy group.

This is a great story. I Honestly don't have anything that you could do to make it better, besides adding detail. Tell me what the environment is like. How you felt with the spotlight on you, and everyones eyes on you.

That's all I have. I really liked it!

Ratings:

Creativity: 6.5

Punctuation/ Grammar: 8

Organization: 7

Overall: 7.5

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