The Donation

One day Ally Moore was watching the British show Surprise Surprise when a little boy nearly dies because of only one kidney , only a man donated his. Ally is determined to donate hers so she does but when it turns out that she donated her kidney to a certain boy out of a famous boy band , her world is turned up side down, she falls in love and life is never the same . Find out what happens in The Donation ................


4. Chapter 3 ~ Surprise Surprise

Chapter 3 - Surprise Surprise


*1 year later*


"Come on! We're going to be late!!" Jessie screamed up the stairs to me.

"I'll be down now!!" I screamed back down to her. Me and Jessie lived together now in a flat in London, because we haven't fell in love to move in with someone else , so we decided to move in together. I coated my thick lashes to a layer of mascara, and fixed my hair which was curled to perfection. I had on a lovely flower pattern maxi dress with a pair of heels. You see, Jessie and I were going to a show, a dance show. I walked down the stairs grabbing my bag and phone and keys in the process while trying not to fall in 6-inch heels.

"Let's go! Chop chop" Jessie rushed me.

"I am , I am!".

We got into the taxi, that was waiting for us outside , because Jessie ordered it for the special occasion. I was really excited about the show , I really love to dance and do gymnastics , so to watch it would be great! Jessie had a mischievous glint in her eye.

"What is up with you today?" I asked her as the taxi man sped up.

"Oh nothing........." She smiled .

"Tell me" I said.





"N.O.spells no"

"Ugh fine then " I gave in . When the taxi man finally came to a halt I gasped,

"Why aren't we at a theatre and why are we at a television studio?" I asked.

"Because we are going to see a show live" she said with a grin.

"Which show..... " I trailed off but Jessie was already walking towards the entrance. I ran up and caught up with her . When we finally got to the door a huge muscley fella was standing with his arms crossed in front of us asking for our passes. Jessie whipped them out of her bag and the man scanned them. We walked in troughs the doors and there were lots of people there all dressed up as well. We twisted and turned down corridors until we came to two giant double doors. We walked through and I gasped, we were on the set of Surprise Surprise.

"What are we doing here?" I asked but she couldn't answer as a loud voice boomed over an intercom,

"Please take your seats , the show will be starting in 60 seconds"

Everybody scrambled, Jessie ran and I chased after her. She ran to seats beside the stairs so we were the closest if somebody wanted to talk to us they could. I started to hum the tune to 'Live While We're Young' by One Direction. Yes if your still wondering I'm still a fan of theirs in fact the biggest fan ever, well they've moved on to become the biggest boy band in the world, and in my opinion the sexiest too. Bright lights came on and some music that I didn't know of. The two sliding doors at the end of the stage opened and out popped Holly Wilobhy, the host of the show. She thanked us all for coming and introduced the show .

"Right first on the show is a girl who has been through a lot in life, her name is Zoe French! "

A girl came out those two doors she was in a wheel chair she was really pretty with blonde hair and big blue eyes . She wheeled over to Holly who helped her onto the couch , then Holly went out into the crowd and picked out a young handsome man. He had tears in his eyes . They put on this video of how Zoe was on holiday waiting to be collected at the airport and sat on a wall. But unfortunately she fell backwards into a river, but the tide was in and she broke her back and was paralysed from the neck down . The handsome young man from the crowd who turned out to be Zoe's boyfriend, which he was called Joey ran 7 marathons in 7 days to raise money for his girlfriend and did lots of charity work for her. The Surprise Surprise team gave them a trip to Hawaii were a special doctor over there might be able to help her walk and a signed football ( soccer ball) and Jersey from his favourite footballer. They walked off stage happily together holding hands.

"Right it's time to go into the crowd" Holly said hopping up and walking up the stairs I was at, she walked past me .

"Some people are very generous and donate things.......... Isn't that right Ally Moore" I looked up shocked into Holly's face who was holding the mike towards me .

"What ?" I asked dumbly.

"Why don't you come down on stage with me and you and your friend Jessie can explain your story" she said walking down the stairs , with me and Jessie trailing behind her. I looked to Jessie what did she do? We walked to the couches on stage , we sat on one, while Holly sat on the other one.

"So Jessie why did you sign up Ally for Surprise Surprise ?" Holly asked.

"Well basically , a year ago , Ally donated her kidney to save a live and I think she really deserves and award for it"Jessie smiled.

"Is this true ? And what made you do that?" Holly asked.

"Well...... I guess.... It was three years ago and I was 16 , I was actually watching this show and a man donated his kidney , and saved a little boys live and I really wanted to do the same" I finished. Everybody in the crowd clapped .

"Well I've heard for that whole year you've wanted to know who you donated your kidney too, am I right?" She asked.

"Yes" I said smiling.

"Well Surprise Surprise we have him here in this studio for you to meet him today"

I gasped "Really?"

"Well we've also heard that your a huge fan of a certain British/Irish boy band?" She smiled.

"Oh my god yeah"

"Well there was a twist on this story , the person you donated your kidney too is actually in that boy band" Holly said facing the camera.

"Well Ally Surprise Surprise we give you ........

The double doors opened

",.............One Direction and the person you donated your kidney too ...... Liam Payne".


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Lots of Love

-Lauren xxxx

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