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2. LIMELIGHT by Emma Bird


                                                    LIMELIGHT, by Emma Bird


Okay, reading this I truly felt like I was reading an actual Harry Potter book. Your writing is amazing and you capture the characters so well. You gave us plenty of detail and awesome sceneries. I felt like I was right there with them, another house-less student. The way you wrote brings the readers into the world of Harry Potter and it's amazing. The house-less student idea is quite unique and I've never heard of it used before. You made the whole house-less student an amazing backstory for the trio, I'm completely glad I read it.


Score out of ten: 9 3/4


The only things I would fix, there are a couple wording mistakes that made it a little weird to read that part but it was easily over-looked and not a big deal. You have a very good choice of words to describe everything.


This is definitely one of the better Harry Potter FanFics on the site guys, go check it out!

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