How Could It Be You ?

Heeyy guys ! I'm Alyssa and this will be my very first movella ! I am SO excited for it, but before I write any further, can y'all give me some feedback on this first chapter ? I would like as many comments as possible to see if I should continue or not ! Everything will be much appreciated and hate/criticism is welcome ! Thanks peaches !

She has to chose, but which one shall it be? Jessabelle has had a hard life, having to watch her daddy die slowly from cancer and then to have her only surviving parent turn to drugs and start beating her. When she finally finds something to make her happy, it comes in too many packages. Will she choose to be with Jake, the cool Casanova skater dude? Or Sam, the down to earth sweetheart who's fighting for her? Or will she go after her dream of being a famous chef? So many choices, so little time…

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