I overall enjoyed reading this story. But I have a few suggestions for you. It may help improve your writing.
1) Try to make descriptions flow. Instead of just plain out saying them in a boring an unappealing way, make it a big more enjoyable by working small little descrpitions around, so the reader gets a clear view of the character, but doesn't get overloaded. Remember, one word speaks for many!
2) I would suggest checking your writing. The plot is good, but I can see a few run on sentences, and a few sentence fragments. Also, I would try to make things a bit clearer.
Otheriwse, the plot is very enjoyable so far! Keep writing it!