Movella Reviews

So, this is like real, actual condtructive critism. So this will be telling what could be better, what you could do better, and what was good. So, just tell me your movella, finished or in progress, and then I'll check it out! (I am open to coauthors for this)


2. Hope

Hope is a so far, a tear jerker movella. I am on the edge of my seat, waiting to see what happens to Jess and Crystal. One of the things you coulf do better, is trying to make chapters a bit longer, and making things a bit more clear, like about the kidnapper, and the other kidnapped kids, but I know you're not finished yet.

Overall, this movella is quite a great movella.


Ps, sorry if I was a bit harsh.


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