Movella Reviews

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3. Fairy Tales...Or Are They?

This is a well thought out movella so far, but I do have a few suggestions.

1) First off, every time a person talks, it should be a new paragraph, this is just typical writing format.

2) Maybe, as of the second chapter, I know that's more of an introduction of the character, but it would flow better if as you progress, you would incorporate those facts into the story, so we know them, but it flows better.

But, I overall think this movella is going to be great as it progresses!

Ray

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