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(Temporarily closed... come back soon.) In Covers, I not only give covers to aspiring authors, but constructive criticism (unless requested against) to make the Movella great! Enjoy! -K. E. Kamiko

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13. Stranded (by Doctor Who 23)

Cute story, but it happens WAY too fast. You have a few chapters before the action begins. And describe it play-by-play- like you're showing what happens, not telling that it did happen.

Other than that, it's a great story. I can't wait to see it progress.

 

 

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