The Tale of Louis Squared

Louis Dawn Tomlinson is a 17 year old girl who moves to Doncaster with her family in order to avoid a stalker. She has serious anger problems and a very short fuse. That paired with her ability to kick box is kinda...well.... Fûcking dangerous! But, when she takes her medicine, she's a very shy, submissive girl.

Louis William Tomlinson is the popular bad boy of the school. He hates it when people don't take him seriously because of his height. He's the leader of a gang that rules the night streets. He had despised Louis (the girl) because she has the same name as him, but can't help but take an interest in her and her submissive nature. He's a very dominant person by nature.

These two seem to care for each other gradually, but they grow a stronger emotion when they find out more about themselves.

With the help of their friends, family, and teachers, read on as Louis Squared learn how to love.

Info: This is not a BDSM story, though actions of spanking, and punishment occur.


8. Disobedience

Four orgasms later, I was panting on the bed, pleading to Louis that he should let me go. I squirmed and pushed his head out of between my thighs. I could barely breathe and I was still blissed out. He propped himself up on the pillow next to me and stared at me with a smile on his face. I turned my head and looked at him with a glare on my face.

"I-*pant*-couldnt breath you-*wheeze*-asshat." i hissed at him, gasping for breath.

He smirked at me and pecked my nose before picking me up. I yelped when his hand touched my still burning bottom and glowered at him when he smirked.

"Next time, you'll know better than to disobey me, right?" he asked me with a quirked eyebrow as he sat  me in his bathtub. He began to fill it up with warm water and took my shirt and bra off leaving me naked.

I sighed and looked at the tiles, too embarrased to answer his question. I heard him sigh and a hand grabbed my arm pulling me up. I whimpered and tried to cover my private parts with my free hand. He glared at me and let go of my arm only to spin me around and smack my bottom five times.


I shrieked when he did it, the wettness making it feel worse, he spun me back aroung and looked at my face that was wet with tears.

"Next time you'll know better than to disobey me, right?" he repeated.

I quickly nodded my head and jumped out of the bathtub to bury my head into his chest. He pulled back after a few seconds and stripped down to his boxers, before sliding into the bathtub and setting me into his lap. I cuddled into his chest and sighed as the warm water cascaded against me. It was nice and I felt safe with him there. 



i know this isnt really good or long, but i did this on a school computer so dont judge me! ill probably post more today, mkay bye


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