Split lives

This story is a 500 words short story about two people living the same life. In this story Lana is just a normal girl until she meets her double what will she do when she is brought to the brink of suicide.

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2. Split Lives Remade

In a dark room a girl called Lana is sitting at her desk writing a short story about cloning. She is just about to write about the clones taking over the world, when the doorbell rings. Lana stands up and goes to answer it. In a copy of the dark room on the other side of the road another Lana is sitting at her desk writing a short story about cloning. She is just about to write about the clones taking over the world, when the doorbell rings. This Lana stands up and goes to answer it.

 

The first Lana steps out of her front door. The second Lana steps out of her front door. The two girls look across the road and see each other doing exactly the same.

“Who is she?” the first Lana thinks to herself;

“Who is she?” the second Lana thinks to herself at the same time.

 

The two girls have both noticed that something is wrong. They both turn their heads to one side at the same time and then they both jump with surprise at the fact that they are copying each other. Lana steps towards the edge of the road and watches as the other girl does the same.

“Who are you?” the two girls say in unison,

“Lana,” the two girls reply in unison.

Lana steps closer to the edge of the road and watches as the other girl does likewise.

“Why are you doing this?” both girls ask as one,

“I don’t know,” they say as if they are the same person.

 

The two girls stood there angrily glaring at the doppelganger standing before them it wasn’t possible for the other girl to be there.

“I know,” the girls say to themselves

 “I will step onto the road and she will have to as well. Then just before the car hits I will surprise he by jumping out the way so that it only hits her”.

 

Both girls think they will have time to move out of the way as they slowly watch the traffic lights turn green and a massive lorry speed straight towards them. The girls both step into the middle of the road so that they are standing right opposite each other.

“Goodbye freak,” they say in unison as the lorry starts to pick up speed then with a loud bang it smashes into the two girls. By the time the lorry driver has called an ambulance there is no life left in the two girls.

 

In a dark room a boy called Talon is sitting on his bed reading a book where a girl called Lana commits suicide. He is just reading it, when the doorbell rings. Talon stands up to answer it. In a copy of the dark room another boy called Talon is sitting on his bed reading a book where a girl called Lana commits suicide. He is just reading it, when the doorbell rings. Talon stands up to answer it. 

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