Ok I'm on my iPhone so the layout is Different for me. Just mentioning that. Means that I'm only on the one direction section.
I hate stories that b like:
Oh my god I bumped into Harry oh Harry yes you can have my number oh my god Harry I love you 2 seconds later we become a relationship oh god Harry you cheated on me oh guess what I got ran over by a car oh look I'm in a coma oh Harry yes I forgive you since you stayed with me the 5 days I'm sleeping oh Harry yes I'll marry you the end
Oh Liam I haven't seen you in ages my brother oh I just fell in love with your best friend is that ok no it's not too bad I love him oh ok your ok with t now cool oh no Niall you kissed your ex while I was looking oh I forgive you oh no I'm preggie oh yes Niall be with me oh god yes let's get married
Louis forgot me after he got into one direction we used to be best friends oh look I got ticket to concert oh my god Louis I missed you yes you kissed me let's get married and have fucking babies
And people are like
"OH MY GAWD YOUR SO GOOD AT WRITING OH MY GOD"
And I hate how the story travels too fast. Like
Oh I bumped into zayn. 2 second later we become a couple. Like god, you need to be friends for a bit. No. I cheated on you, forgive me.
Like fuck. Slow down. I realise it's annoying to spend time on a story and that it's just a fan fiction but at least put some effort into it. Every author writes carefully. Your story is crap if it's the same story idea as everything else. Your story is crap if it doesn't make sense. Omg, especially the blurbs:
Katie got one direction tickets what happens when she meets the boys and what happens to her dad will she fall in love with Harry
NAH SHIT? SHE WILL FALL IN LIVE WITH NIALL, HER DAD WILL DIE AND EVERYTHING WILL JUST TURN OUT DANDY. AND GUYS, COME ON. I KNOW THIS IS JUST FANFICTIONS BUT SERIOUSLY PUT SOME GRAMMAR AND SHIT IN IT.
Holly discovers her brother is famous what happens when she find him in a store and why is their mum being weird and what happens with zayn and holly do they fall in love
WELL OBVIOUSLY SHE REUNITES WITH HER BROTHER AND SHE MEETS THE BAND AND THEIR MUM IS EITHER A CHEATER OR IS PREGGIE OR IS A DRUG DEALER AND ZAYN AND HER GET MARRIED
I read one where it was like
"Get ready for dinner babe!" Harry says
"You pulled me out of school at 12 I get ready for a dinner date?"
"Just go get ready!"
I do as I am told and walk towards the door, Harry driving away. I open the door to find my mum sitting there watching tv (like she's not a work or anything she's just sitting there like all single mums do)
"What are you doing back Sophie?"
"Harry picked me up and told me to get ready for dinner!"
"Oh ok I'll help you get ready" (so the mums fine with her daughter being pulled out of school by her older boyfriend and is willing to help her get ready 7 hours before the date)
Like oh my god I realise these are fantasies but my fucking Jesus Christ make it believe able!
Also, sex scenes. It's really really uncomfortable when you have to imagine sex with your idol. Like come on. Can't you at least just;
And then we made sweet passionate love to each other.
Instead of a whole sex scene with very good detail. I know! Maybe if people put as much effort into other Fanfictions as they do writing sex scenes, we would actually have more well written books! Yes, there are extremely good books such as the stole my heart series and what not, but we have some really crap ones that are really popular? WUT? There are some really good writers out there that haven't been noticed yet!
A/N: I would love some support on my Louis/Niall fanfiction called The Backstage Passes. It's about a girl named katie who gets backstage passes and something happens THAT NOBODY HAS EVER WRITTEN ABOUT! It's true! It's a totally original idea! As I said I would love some support! Also, for the sake of it
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