Cinderella's Sister

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  • Published: 14 Jan 2014
  • Updated: 20 Jan 2014
  • Status: Complete
Cinderella's Sister; Kim and Louis has been lovers since they're teen years, but things changed when Kim's father Blake remarries to Deborah, who has a daughter name Eleanor, a year older than Kim. Deborah loved Kim, but once Eleanor moved in, things started to change. Deborah abused Kim and Eleanor soon joined in with her mother. They did all they could to make Kim and Louis separate. Once Louis board out of the Country to the US. Kim is tortured by her evil stepmother and stepsister while her father is always away at work. Six years later, Louis returns to London, and with no further ado, Kim vanishes from Louis just a split second after they see eachother. Three years later, Louis comes across Kim, but somehow, she doesn't remember him. Read on and see if Louis and Kim will reunite or will they forever be lost together.


2. Wicked

Mrs. Homes: Class, this is Eleanor, she's Kim's step sister, she'll be joining us in this class, please make her feel welcomed. 

Eleanor: *goes and sits next to kim* 

Kim: *smiles* Welcome to Woodside Eleanor. 

Eleanor: Don't talk to me. 

Kim: *sits in silence* 

(After Class) 

Kim: *waiting outside under the roof* 

Eleanor: *looks at kim* What? Afraid of the rain. 

Kim: No. 

Paul: *pulls up* 

Eleanor: *looks at the car* 

Louis: *gets out the car and smiles* 

Eleanor: *smiles* Wow. 

Louis: *puts the umbrella over kim and smiles* Let's go. 

Eleanor: *looks at kim upset* 

Kim: *smiles and walks with Louis* Ok. 

Louis: *puts his arms around kim* 

Eleanor: *gets mad and walks off in the rain* 

Kim: Eleanor! 

Eleanor: *turns around* 

Kim: Would you like a ride home? 

Eleanor: *walks off mad* 

(A Few Weeks Later) 

Deborah: What is this? 

Eleanor: What? 

Deborah: Why are you already failing school! I thought you were smarter Eleanor Calder! 

Eleanor: Mom, I'm sorry, I, I don't know... 

Deborah: You better raise your grade up if you want to continue living here! I don't want to be embarrassed! 

Kim: It's ok Deborah, the work has been a little hard. 

Deborah: *looks at kim* Deborah? *slaps kim* 

Kim: *shocked* 

Eleanor: *shocked* 

Deborah: Why Deborah?! Why not call me mom! 

Kim: *cries* I'm, I'm sorry. 

Deborah: Sorry what? 

Kim: *crying* I'm sorry mom. 

Deborah: *touches kims hair* That's much better. 

Louis: *rings the doorbell* 

Deborah: *walks to the door* Who is it? 

Louis: It's me. 

Deborah: *looks at kim* Are you gonna go out looking like that. 

Kim: *touches her face* 

Deborah: Come. 

Kim: *follows Deborah* 

Deborah: Go in the closet. 

Kim: *walks into the closet* 

Deborah: *locks the closet/goes and opens the door* Hello Louis, Kim's not feeling well today. 

Louis: Oh? 

Deborah: But my daughter is willing to take her place for tonight. 

Eleanor: What? 

Deborah: Why don't you go out with Louis tonight, you been home since you first moved in, go and explore and have some fun. 

Eleanor: Ok. *smiles and leaves with Louis* 

Louis: Would you like to go to the mall? 

Eleanor: Yeah, I would love to go to the mall. 

Louis: My mom owns the mall. 

Eleanor: Wow? I love the rides there, the train and fair wheel is my favorite. 

Louis: *chuckles* I'm glad you like them. 

Eleanor: *smiles* Can we go to the ice skating arena? I want to skate, it's been a while. 

Louis: Yeah, we can go there.  

Eleanor: *smiles* Ah! Thank you! *hugs Louis* 

Louis: *forces a smile* 

(Later On) 

Deborah: Get out. 

Kim: *gets out the closet* 

Deborah: Go to your room and do not come out. 

Kim: *runs to her room scared* 

Deborah: Come out and you are dead! 

Kim: *hides under her covers* 

Eleanor: *rings the doorbell* 

Deborah: Who is it? 

Eleanor: It's me mom. *smiles* 

Deborah: *opens the door* How was it? 

Eleanor: It was great. *looks out the window* 

Paul: *drives off* 

Eleanor: I wish I had a boyfriend like Kim's mom. 

Deborah: You don't need one like hers, you can have hers. 

Eleanor: Really? 

Deborah: I'll make sure you end up with him sweetie. *fixes eleanors hair and smiles evil* 

Eleanor: *smiles evil back* 

Blake: *checks on the girls/opens the door* 

Kim: *gets scared* 

Eleanor: *sleeping* 

Blake: *fixes the blanket for Eleanor and looks at kim and goes to fix her blanket then sits on the bed* 

Kim: *sits up and hugs blake from behind* 

Blake: *chuckles* I thought you were sleeping. 

Kim: *shakes her head* No. Dad? 

Blake: *holds kims hand* Yes honey? 

Kim: Do you miss mom? 

Blake: Honey, you know I will always miss your mother. 

Kim: *cries*  

Blake: *turns and looks at kim* What's the matter honey? 

Deborah: *goes by the door and listens* 

Kim: Nothing, I'm just gonna really miss you when I go to the US next week. I'm not gonna get to see you for a long time and I was just crying. 

Blake: Aw honey, you know you can always call me. 

Kim: I know dad. 

Blake: *hugs kim* Get some sleep honey, you have to wake up early for school tomorrow. 

Kim: Ok. *smiles* 

Deborah: *runs to the room* 

Blake: *kisses kims forehead* Goodnight. 

Kim: Goodnight dad. 

Blake: *walks into his room* 

Deborah: *fakes crying* 

Blake: What's wrong with you? 

Deborah: It's just that, I'm gonna miss our little Kim.  

Blake: Honey, she's gonna be fine. 

Deborah: It's just that, we haven't even been a family for a year yet and she's leaving already. I really don't want her to go Blake. 

Blake: Don't worry, I'll talk to her. 

Deborah: Oh, thank you honey, I love you so much. 

Blake: Stop crying and come to bed ok. 

Deborah: You go first, I'll come. 

Blake: *goes to bed* 

Deborah: *looks in the mirror and smiles evil*

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