Cinderella's Sister

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  • Published: 14 Jan 2014
  • Updated: 20 Jan 2014
  • Status: Complete
Cinderella's Sister; Kim and Louis has been lovers since they're teen years, but things changed when Kim's father Blake remarries to Deborah, who has a daughter name Eleanor, a year older than Kim. Deborah loved Kim, but once Eleanor moved in, things started to change. Deborah abused Kim and Eleanor soon joined in with her mother. They did all they could to make Kim and Louis separate. Once Louis board out of the Country to the US. Kim is tortured by her evil stepmother and stepsister while her father is always away at work. Six years later, Louis returns to London, and with no further ado, Kim vanishes from Louis just a split second after they see eachother. Three years later, Louis comes across Kim, but somehow, she doesn't remember him. Read on and see if Louis and Kim will reunite or will they forever be lost together.


20. I Just Want To See You

Zayn: Listen to me Zayn, right now Kim is not the same anymore. 

Louis: You were with her? 

Zayn: Yes, but she needs help the most right now. 

Louis: Where is she?! 

Zayn: *cries* Louis, Kim has eye cancer now, I can't be there for her, please go to the beach house and help her for me. 

Louis: *hurt/gets up and leaves* 

Kim: *falls to the ground/vision blacks out* Huh? 

Louis: *driving/thinking of what zayn said* 

Kim: *wipes her eyes/cries/scared* Louis Louis! Louis! *cries more* Help me Louis! It's dark and I'm scared! *screams and cries* Louis! *crying* 

Louis: *parks and sees kim by the shore/runs to kim* 

Kim: *grabs onto Louis* Where'd you for so long Zayn! Don't you know I can't see anymore! All I see is pitch black, I'm scared, I can't see how Louis looks like anymore! *cries* I can't see Louis anymore. *crying* 

Louis: *cries* 

Kim: *sits on the couch* 

Louis: *steps aside* 

Kim: *grabs onto Louis* Zayn, please don't tell Louis about this, I don't want him to know I'm like this you hear me. 

Louis: *silenced* 

Kim: Why aren't you answering me Zayn? Can you take me to go see Louis? I want to see him. 

Louis: *wears zayns jacket and gets on the bus to a nearby restaurant* 

Kim: No, Zayn, maybe I shouldn't see him, I'm not ready yet. 

Louis: *hurt/crying silently* 

Kim: Maybe we should go back, yeah? 

Louis: *helps kim sit on the chair*  

Kim: *smiles and fixes herself/puts on her glasses and smiles* 

Louis: *sits at another table/watching kim and crying* 

Kim: *smiles* 

Louis: *wipes his tears/takes off zayns jacket and puts on his/goes and sits across from kim* Hey. 

Kim: *smiles* You look great today Louis. It's been a while, how are you? 

Louis: *cries* Why didn't you tell me? 

Kim: I'm sorry, I didn't want it to be hard for us, so I left. 

Louis: Is that what you really want?  

Kim: *smiles* Yeah, today is our final goodbye ok.  

Louis: You really want this then ok, let's break up. 

Kim: *smiles* Thank you, let's shake on it. *reaches out for louis's hand* 

Louis: *shakes kims hand* 

Kim: *smiles big* 

Louis: *cries harder* 

Kim: Don't cry, you should be smiling like me. *smiles* 

Louis: *tries not to cry loud* 

Kim: Perfect, just like that. *smiles* Ok, you can go now, Zayn's gonna come back. 

Louis: *slowly walks outside and sits next to the window next to kim and cries his heart out loud* 

Kim: *cries* 

Louis: *cont. crying his heart out* 

(Later On) 

Paul: I'm sure Zayn didn't do it, find the who's behind it, and I'm bailing Zayn out. 

Kim: Did I do a good job with Louis? 

Louis: *cries again* 

Kim: I didn't do bad did I? Zayn, why aren't you talking to me? 

Louis: *crying* 

Kim: Zayn. *gets up and falls* Zayn!? *cries* Why aren't you talking to me! Did you leave me! Zayn! *cries more* Why?! Why aren't you talking to me! *crying* 

Zayn: *barges in and hugs kim* I'm right here, I'm not leaving you ever, I'm staying with you forever right here. 

Kim: *crying* Don't leave me, don't you know I can't even see anymore, all I see is black everywhere and it scares me. 

Zayn: *cries* 

Louis: *cries harder/heartbroken/hurt* 

Zayn: Let's get you to bed to rest. *helps kim to the bed upstairs* 

Louis: *sits near kim* 

Kim: *sitting on the bed* 

Zayn: *sits next to Louis* 

Kim: How did I do with Louis today? How does he look now? Is his hair long? 

Zayn: He looks the same and still very handsome. *smiles* 

Kim: *smiles* That's funny, it feels like he's right next to me. 

Zayn: Of course he is... he's always gonna be next to you. 

Louis: *crying* 

Kim: I want to see Louis. *cries* I want to see him so badly it hurts. 

Zayn: He... is next to you. 

Kim: *grabs louis's face* 

Louis: *crying* Kim. 

Kim: *moves back* Why are you here! Leave! Now! Leave! I don't want you to see me like this! Go! 

Louis: Kim please. *grabs kims hand* 

Kim: *pushes louis's hands away* Are you taking me as a joke!? You think this is funny huh! 

Louis: No Kim, never. *pulls and hugs kim* I love you Kim. *cries hard* 

Kim: *cries hard* Louis, I want to see you so badly. 

Louis: *hugs kim tighter* 

Zayn: *leaves the room*

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