The Story of a Fallen Angel

An Angel fallen from the depths of pain is trapped on earth after she took just steps into the forbidden pathway. No Angel that went down ever came back and i mean you couldn't blame a helpless girl could you? she just wished she new what was down there.

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4. an Unchangeable Choice

Alinia's P.O.V

"well I'm dearly sorry but I think I have done enough wondering and this may be my final conversation with you, I am going to investigate!" I announced with teary eyes "Alinia I...I can't believe you're going to do this" Eriana said shakily I felt bad for her but I couldn't be a loyal angel, the voice had scarred me and I would never be perfect like everyone else. "Alinia please think this over!" I heard Eriana plead and saw her eyes begging me to say something like 'you're right what was I thinking' but I couldn't lie I just couldn't "I'm sorry" I whispered and with that I left. I ran crying to my house packing my things hurriedly in my only bag, we were meant to use it to carry food for picnics in the park with friends.Still it was the only bag i owned and it would look weird carrying every last belonging I owned. I heard a knock on the door and opened it to see Eriana. "Alinia if you are going I am coming with you" She said I cried and she demanded what was wrong "it's just did you hear what you just said? you are loyal to The Master not me!" I said calmly. "Well lets just say I care about my friend" she replied.

 

Later that day after talking Eriana out of following me, I ran towards the forbidden path area and ran up to the path and without persuading I walked slowly just 3 steps in, nothing went wrong. Then I saw it, a faint but see-able shadow then a whisper, "a few more steps nothing bad has happened yet!" I stepped in more when I turned to take probably my last look at Heaven ever I saw Eriana crying, actually she was bawling her eyes out she was kneeling on the ground just outside the forbidden area then i realised what a terrible thing I had just done.

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