Returning Demons

The first vers + bridge + chorus to a song I wrote about someone very close to me.
Please comment and/or rate or something as it's the first song I've ever written and I have no idea if it's any good or not :) it would make me extremely happy!
Let me know what you think and tell me what I'm doing right/can do better?

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1. Returning Demons

Nose burning, breath reeking

Of that substance we know so well

Like it was her very first time

Wrist aching, blood dripping

Down on her mother's white carpet

But she doesn't care

It's been a while since she last saw it

But it's back now

I can tell it's taking over her mind once again

But she doesn't even notice

She's too used to it to notice, to care

But I see it straight away

I see her returning demons

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