Does She Know? *LARRY FAN FIC*

Daddy, why does Daddy look upset? Why does he have marks on his arms? Was it the cat again.
I look down at our Daughter, Darcy. Unable to tell her about what's wrong with her father. What was wrong with me either.

*No longer a Short Story*

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5. If heaven wasn't so far away

Louis' POV-
I shouldn't have gone back to get the others, I should have just followed him straight here. Liam and Zayn try to break down the door and we enter Harry's room. He is no-where in sight, his phone is sitting broken on the ground and we hear a yelp coming from the bathroom. He can't be, no. Not again. I can't believe this "Guys, you're going to have to break down another door..." I say. Pointing my finger towards the bathroom door, my finger shaking as I realise what may be happening in the room next door. Kate and the girls are screaming at Harry to open the door. Then my heart drops as I hear a bang on the door, I knew it wasn't the boys. They continued to try to knock the door down and I just stood there emotionless, I knew what was happening behind that door and I was too weak to stop it. The boys gasp and back away from the door, they were looking at the gap from under the door. Blood was spreading and the boys gave me a pained expression. They knew about me liking Harry, but they knew I loved Elounour just as much. They continued to break down the door as I crumbled to the ground shaking. Perrie noticed me and quickly came up to me, she called Elounour and as she was heading towards me I felt my body begin to shake furiously and everything went black.

Louis' POV-
I wake up in a white room. Everyone was surrounding me "Oh my god, Lou bear!" Elounour cries. Causing everyone to wake up "W-where's Harry?" I turn to face Liam who gave me a pained expression "Calm down Lou, You just had a panic attack..."  "Is he ok!?" I shout "C-calm down Lou..." Elounour whispers "H-he didn't m-make it...." Niall stutters, tears in his eyes. I just broke down "Why?" I whisper to myself You're the screw-up now Louis! I hear someone whisper. I look around the room and everyone is looking at me with pale faces "L-Louis, you're not hearing voices are you?"

 

Hey guys! I'm not really one for authors notes but I thought I might as well put one in now.

First of all what do you think of Harry's death? I know it doesn't match up with the story but It will later on. I know this is a short story at the moment but I don't really think people like it. I'm not sure. What do you think? Should I continue with this story?

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